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SoddenMedusa15dCommentedCh 3 Chapter 3- SoddenMedusa15dCommented
I was fine with just Leah and Rosalie but the way you write these scenes makes me want Bella in the relationship too.
Instead she tried to fight with him and show him hate, mainly because it got her so hot and bothered to do so, she knew she could stop thinking about him and maybe try something with the Cullen that was showing her interest. But that wasn't what she wanted, no she wanted the stupid sexy jerk, who had a girlfriend maybe even two if the way Rosalie acted was anything to go off of. - SoddenMedusa17dReplied to KingSpy25i
I have a lot of ff i'm reading at once and this one doesn't update everyday so its not at the top of the list and easy to forget and i was talking about the people he hasn't met yet.
She stopped her bike and reached over to her neck, feeling a string connecting to it. Confused, she yanked it, yelping in pain. Bringing the string to her face, she yelled in fright as a red and blue spider dangled from the other end. Flicking it off her hand, she dusted her hands in disgust. - SoddenMedusa17dCommented
Are you going to make every woman he's with get spider powers?
She stopped her bike and reached over to her neck, feeling a string connecting to it. Confused, she yanked it, yelping in pain. Bringing the string to her face, she yelled in fright as a red and blue spider dangled from the other end. Flicking it off her hand, she dusted her hands in disgust. - SoddenMedusa17dCommented
The absolute most annoying thing Naruto did i'm glad they made him stop saying it in the anime
Naruto winced and rubbed his head, but still managed to call out indignantly, "Hey, that hurt! Believe it!" He looked up at his mother with an endearing pout. - SoddenMedusa19dCommented
This just makes the entire romance feel empty. There was no prelude or build up to it and no dialogue. If there is no emotion behind the interaction between characters it makes them feel like they don't matter especially since the Mc has been talking about being in love with all of these characters and then losing them all, over and over again. I hope you don't do to Jane, Tali, and Liara what you did here.
The rest is history. - SoddenMedusa19dCommentedCh 88 C88 Time After Time
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What does it look like
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Thats lame, its the multiverse anybody could get with anybody, relationships especially the ones in DC aren't set in stone.
I'd gladly take a hero girlfriend but... I have a no girlfriend stealing policy. Even if they have yet to be together, there is no way I am stealing the would be girlfriend of someone. - SoddenMedusa20dCommented
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You cant just skip past all of this important stuff.
So I used my knowledge to get close to her and after a few months, I got into a relationship with her. I never thought I'd manage it, but it happened. - SoddenMedusa21dCommented
This looks absolutely atrocious. She looks inbred. Just use regular pics instead of Ai especially when its dollar store AI.
Tonks - SoddenMedusa21dCommented
Is she talking in slow motion
"Aaalrriighttt jjuustt ppplleeaasseee dddooonnt hhhuurttt hhimmm." - SoddenMedusa22dCommented
You telling them what your powers are and how they work is more suspicious then saying you don't know.
I'll join them and get all the use I can out of them before leaving. I'll tell them my xgene connects me to a different dimension which I gained some abilities from. - SoddenMedusa23dCommented
Its definitely a little too forced. I feel like Hulk is too straightforward and confident to be that flustered and nervous.
(Was that too fast in the romance part?) - SoddenMedusa23dCommented
Does Erin have parents?
(laughing warmly) "Well met, young Erin. I have a feeling you'll teach us all some very valuable lessons"