I know you wrote it in a hurry but you imagination is really on a whole another level. How can you think of three different stories with completely different plot that easily.

I like your story. I think it has great potential. I know you are giving your best but try to give us more interesting details like how other characters get there and why Yaku does have no one looking for him. Mine favourite is Dev as He is a straightforward boy, he wants to become leader so he became, no offense to other characters