Lerajie

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It's ok. It just not my type, I think every readers have type of the stories that they like. And keep it up. You write the great novel. I like the world building of this novel. Sounded different and creative.

The truth, this is the great novel, but it's not my type I think. I was read till 3 or 4 chapter, however i don't like long narrative story (so sorry). Overall this is good story, but you need to correct your punctuation. And then, i have some advice. If you want to give long narratives for explain your world, I think it's more better if you put that on character dialogue, it will be more attract to read more and more. Sorry if I got mistakes in my review. Thank you and keep it up.

I think this will be a great novel, but you need to check again about your punctuation. Keep it up.

Thank you for the support. I'll do my best for writing this story.

Yeah, I think if i'm in there ... i will got PTSD too. See the other people hit by a car, even he was covered by blood and get fracture. But he immediately stood up and run away like nothing happened. That's so scare.

Thank you for the support. I'll do my best.

I think this would be the great story in the future. Keep it up.

Thank you for your support. I'll try my best.

This story really interesting. I think it would be great book. Keep it.