ThisOldMaster

Too many OC will just destroy the immersion on fanfic, just do an original one if that's the case

There's no relationship between hina and smoker aside from being on the same batch at training in the elite training

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the full name is trash and you have to read it everytime, life isn't fragile, life sucks

This woman is really annoying and tactless, or should i say the author? The kid still recovering and you're bringing him to a mission that has nothing to do with him? He's always forced to do anything that isn't his business, which means this will be happening a lot in the future. This is just a waste of time

I'm with Minato on this one

i thought anbu isn't allowed to say their name, what's the use of anbu mask then?

mc

the descriptions of characters are lacking if you didn't know them especially thec

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