TengoUnaGranDeuda

I will take the selfishness of writing my first review, I tried to upload this story a few months ago but due to personal problems I had to abandon it, but I came back with many ideas, the chapters rewritten and many already finished to have at least a month of constant releases. I hope you comment that you like it and that you would like it to improve in order to continue growing as an author

A very well planned and thought story, capable of keeping you waiting for what will happen next and how it will develop, with a little better writing it would be a perfect novel

a fluid story without obstacles, good narration, good action scenes and an easy to understand plot. It has many good points and in general it is a satisfactory read, as advice I would like a little more description in the environment and that a little more be known about the levels of power within the book, at least to know how strong the character is protagonist at the current point of the story compared to average warriors

you missed the X in Xander

thanks for all the corrections

First of all, welcome to everyone who decides to give a bit of their time to read my story. I'll shamelessly give myself a review to not only give you an idea of ​​what I'm looking for with the novel but also to set a goal for the quality that I want to achieve. I've written (or at least tried) a few short stories before but they all failed as they didn't convince me, I'm very serious with this trying to give them a satisfying plot and development without sacrificing world-building, the first few chapters may be a bit long but it was a necessary evil, from chapter 5 onwards I will try to keep them to 1500 words for easy and fluent reading. Without further ado, I hope you like the story and comment on everything you like and likewise, what you don't, I'm open to constructive criticism.