BlackMountainKing
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BlackMountainKing23hPostedI don't have much experience writing reviews but I will try my best. The world building is good and the writing quality is also good. Although there are a few writing errors here and there but they can be ignored. I like how intense the first chapter was. All the emotions were properly expressed. The only problem I have with this novel is that the sentences are unnecessarily long. No reader likes to read through a very long paragraph. it makes them lose interest very quickly. Some people are very lazy, you know. Anyways, apart from that, this is a pretty good novel. Continue to write, and improve your skills as a writer. May the story bless you.
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The Towers that appeared all over Earth are gateways to the main Tower.
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I was a little confused at first but after reading it carefully, it became easier to understand. Just read a few chapters and I must say the world is well balanced as well as the power system. I want to advise the author not to join two many words together. Readers don't like reading long sentences and make sure to use commas at the right places. That'll be all for now. Overall, It's a great story. I advise the readers to give it a try.
- BlackMountainKing6dReplied to OrbitAround
Thank you for the review. I will make sure to post future chapters.
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Well, this is the first time I'm writing a review but I will say my honest opinion. I like the story so far. I like there was a slow pace before the main action. it gives the story a more realistic flow. The characters are also likeable and they have their own personalities as well, making them feel like real characters. I will just leave this five star review and come back when there are more chapters
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A right hand slammed into that annoying alarm clock. Of course, if someone was suddenly awakened from a nice dream, they would probably react in the same manner. - BlackMountainKing24dReplied to Takumoto
They were heading towards the gremory household. You know what, I don't know.
3.) What will be the effects of Imagine Breaker in the Underworld? Your answer is very important for this second volume. - BlackMountainKing24dReplied to Takumoto
But isn't that train owned by the gremory household? I can't really remember the exact details.
3.) What will be the effects of Imagine Breaker in the Underworld? Your answer is very important for this second volume. - BlackMountainKing25dReplied to sansdaman_142
It is not related to the story đ. I was just asking a question.
5.) This is not related to the story. Will be a side effect for a character with immortality? Let's say a character that can resurrect everytime they die. - BlackMountainKing25dReplied to sansdaman_142
It is not related to this story. It is for my other story I'm working on.
5.) This is not related to the story. Will be a side effect for a character with immortality? Let's say a character that can resurrect everytime they die. - BlackMountainKing25dReplied to Logan_Morale
It's not related to this fan-fic.
5.) This is not related to the story. Will be a side effect for a character with immortality? Let's say a character that can resurrect everytime they die.