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Bro you are correctly right, i only read only 500+ chapters, and i am done already......... i can except anything but not being a slave, neve. I would rather die or kill the other one.......................i have lots of lots to say but i can't because my hand aches while typing........but ya i have a different novel which might suit you '' Super Gene' . This one is the true copy of it.
Look i will be blunt, i really like the concept of this story despite, it being a copy of Super Gene to a large extent, but in the long run. A protagonist who is a slave is not at all acceptable....... and a sword always ligers around his neck of turning into a slave by anyone by knowing his true name, after he somehow manages to break the bondage from the first master. And plus, he doesn't show any traits of a hero, he is like a true slave. Means, i can't just explain it is words guys......this is kind of sick feeling. I read till 5oo+ chapters and i will say that it is not boring but the real essence is missing in it. A hero who is a slave to others will is just pathetic...... and sometimes i saw him making decisions that didn't make any sense......... it was as if the writer just wanted to put it there and he just did. His behaviour, his mentality of thinking, most of the times it sucks. But don't get me wrong, i am not saying that the story is bad in any sense, ya but those who like alfa males, this is not for you. Even though in the story, hero mentions that he doesn't want to be Neph's sid kick, but he was always, from the beginning. Seeing it looked like, author doesn't understand his character himself. Note: I f you like the idea of story, go and check Super Gene, that's the real deal.
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this is more and more like super gene, a gem..... a true gem.
hahah..........haheheheh.........I may be wrong but it is looking more and more like my vampire system. I hope i am wrong, let's see what future awaits us???
Bro that is something that i said, 3 months ago. The current me thanks that Xiao Yan was a complete psycho trash, who only deserved thrashing, thrashing and intense thrashing. Sick, pussy sicker psycho basterd.
bro you are the real deal, you really took, fan-fic to different class. really, really something beyond our imagination.
Ha Bhai, e sala Chinese log ...dimag ka bhosda karne pe laga rahta hai. Kabhi kabhal emotion pe se kabu hat jata hai.
Lord Dhruv is my name. Sorry, for late reply.
Tell me one thing, why did you even write this story?? Just stop writing, it's full of shit.... Xiao Yan is already creepy enough to barge into a 4 year old girls's house, despite having a common sense of a mature guy. And now you want another mother fucker of that level. The story is the same as always, what's the difference?..... i can't seem to find out. After your character becomes a Dou Di, he will sit tight and Xun'er's arse, along with Gu Yuan's....... Rather the writting this, why don't you completely copy the same story. That would be far more better then this, piles . And above that, stop using false review to put public in dark. That's even more pathetic .