Karaoni_a

A really late follow up after reading about 30 chapters, (apologies for being a slow reader), so here is my follow up review. ☝️🤓 First and foremost each chapters have seen a great writing improvement with each chapter's passing. The previous chapters are great, but my only tiny nitpick is that it had some minor spelling mistakes here and then, but this was no longer the case in later chapters, accompanied by the consistently improving writing quality, which definitely inspired me to learn a few words and writing methods. 😉 The story development is great, to be on the edge of your seat and waiting to see what happen in the next chapter, it's surely a writing skill that the author has mastered for sure. It definitely gets better with each chapter's passing, and I am definitely looking forward for future chapters. Overall, this was a great read so far, and I am looking forward for the rest chapters. Good luck and keep striving for improvement! [img=coins].

Thank you Mishi, I had updated them accordingly.

Thank you so much for the review, it really inspired me to continue writing forward. I must apologize for my delays and grammatical mistakes and mu inconsistent schedules, but nonetheless, your reviews has been reinvigorating for my motivation to write more.

Four chapters in and I'm already interested at the story. Personally, I've not liked first person stories, but I have to admit that this webnovel got me hooked on Snowe's perspective and her viewpoint. The progressive world-building is an interesting pick as it allowed me as the reader to grow with the world around them, which I think it's pretty neat. As for the writing quality? it's pretty good. The grammar and writing style is good, personally, and although there was just a few minor mishaps such as a spelling mistake or two, it did not bother me too much. But there's always room for improvement and striving to be better Author! Overall, after reading four chapters, I think it's a pretty good Webnovel that deserves some credit. Great job, and good luck with future works.

Hey, I have not read your book yet, but i have seen in your account that you might need help in improving your English. Not sure if you have it yet, but you could download Grammarly. It helps with your writing. You can also use Quillbot to help check your grammar too. Also, i find the synopsis of this story unique and interesting, keep up the great work buddy and good luck.