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I mostly agree with bilal arshads review aside from the fact about the system I'm pretty sure author is rewriting the chapters to get rid of the system as he sees no point but i don't feel he is overpowered entering into blue lock I don't think he could beat someone like nagi just yet his base soccer skills in the story are overpowered but he doesn't have really anything special at the moment like isagi's direct shot and he doesn't have an ego yet as of chapter 27(just entered blue lock)

authors getting rid of the system I think doing edit of the previous chapters because he felt no need for it

+1

The writing quality is something you wouldn't expect from most novels on this platform and is something you can enjoy without knowing the plot from the series (I can't know for sure if it is actually the case from three chapters but if its anything like the last novel it should be. highly recommend their other novel Aswell)

will do

I haven't read the chapter, but I want to know if this is academy city from toaru or from a different original novel if it's from a different novel could you please tell me what it's called thank you

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Would you be adding the new fanfic to Web novel later on or solely Patreon?

I agree with this guy +1

i will giving stones tomorrow