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Ayo, too much Xianxia vibes

Idiotic. That was literally the only thing you needed to guard against. Drop

Bruh, such a cheap move to keep Frieza alive. It would be much better to just resurrect him

I’m dropping this bs. MC has Sharingan but it’s a useless one that can’t learn anything? There is not a single untalented Sharingan user because Sharingan contributes to ninjutsu talent. There are only 2 crucial events since the start of the book: Shisui’s suicide and Uchiha Massacre. Just 2. Not 3 or 4. MC just needed to keep these 2 in mind. MC basically can reliably predict future and has meta knowledge, yet nothing changed. Idiotic.

Was there absolutely no way to ask for a loan of a few million Ryo from his grandfather or Fugaku? Just say you wanna squander them and will not forget the favor.

The author added too many elements, mixing in Marvel, DC, JoJo, Bleach. The plot is super messy, not to talk about cosmology. MC’s personality is blank. Simple grind and nothing else

Well, you made the work much less interesting by not allowing bad guys to participate. Plus, you allowed Narcissa to participate but not Snape? Crazy

Author should have spawned MC after Aizen defected. Otherwise, him letting Hogyoku go is just silly

Yeah, the author is upscaling Aizen’s invention-type prowess too much, even if through Hogouku

Bruh, I understand the author needs the plot to happen but it makes MC stupid asf for even letting Aizen take Hogouku