The story is interesting, but you're putting in a lot of training and a lot of dungeons, making him interact more with his family, like Ria or his mother, and have a time skip
Currently, we were on a mission to go to the Maré Complex, along with our Battalion, the 34th Police Precinct (34th Police Station), and the BOPE Battalion along with the PRF (Federal Highway Police) to seize stolen vehicles that were operating in this area.
Is this story a copy or rewritten? because I've seen a story almost similar to this, in which the MC is in love with Elia, but he can't save her and she ends up dying and he goes after the Lannisters