Sins_Bin

Pure rage bait and fluff of content going in circles on one story point. Good writing and characters. Not complaining but if rage bait is not ur thing don’t even bother reading if you can’t handle. Looking forward to pump up more action and drama ✌️

The silver

One of the best and clean books I have ever read on WebNovel. Hope to see more of your fantastic work Author. Keep up the good work.

Audio mode sucks for this book. Readers read out smiley face for all system messages. Rewrite and don’t use :] at end of lines

It’s a great start, keep up with your work. There is a little rush in certain info sections and seems like an over kill for details. Overall it’s flowing well so far. Looking forward to read more of your work.

It’s feasting not fasting

It’s a rushed out power ups. Great story line but was hastened by author. Also it’s a half baked product left out without any updates. Characters are okay but MC just gets powerups in every other chapter. Fights and world development is poor. Translation is good. Can’t complain and over all there’s a lot more room for improvement

TYPO: Hearing not earring

Stop using =========, they are so annoying in audio mode

I don’t understand the stupidity of MC way of working with girls. As an apology he spends 20k credits!!! Author calls them with descriptions rather than using names. Comedy is barely present. There are good characters but they were barely used in story building. Got bored barely into 100 chapters. It’s more of r13 than r18. More of drama than fantasy genere.