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Good story so far keep it up ………………………………………………………………..………………………………………………………………..………………………………………………………………..………………………………………………………………..………………………………………………………………..………………………………………………………………..

Do we need a back story

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The way it is written sounds like a mtl novel ………………………………………….………………………………………….………………………………………….………………………………………….………………………………………….………………………………………….

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I think this is good, looking back the story does need more perspectives

2, I think you should just really speed up this arc and then move on to slice of life.

It’s 4 chapter’s ahead