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DaoistpRY7hg

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Great reader, Bad Writer. Doing my best to improve.

2023-02-13 JoinedGlobal
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  • DaoistpRY7hg
    DaoistpRY7hg8d
    Commented

    Why didn't Charles know about them a year ago when they both awakened their powers?

    Making preparations to visit the two Mutant signatures he had just located in Rio De Janeiro, Brazil.
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    All New Sunspot (Marvel)
    Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
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  • DaoistpRY7hg
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    Commented
    "Do you really think someone would be so bold to attack Kings Landing? And that it would work?", Stannis asks me. 
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    Robert I Baratheon
    Book&Literature · DaoistWDfd8h
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  • DaoistpRY7hg
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    Posted

    Great premise with a decent amount of character development in your OC. I also like how you've honored the source material and lore while filling in Blanche spots (see what I did there). Please don't cover this story with dust. I get your busyness, but some people like myself enjoy your writing. [img=strong][img=More pls][img=recommend]

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    I am the son of Simon Petrikov (An adventure time fanfic)
    Anime & Comics · Dagon_vcg
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  • DaoistpRY7hg
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    Commented
    "I'm giving her all she's got general." The captain replied.
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    An Osmosian in Marvel (MCU Fanfiction)
    Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
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  • DaoistpRY7hg
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    Commented
    "Zakuul," he muttered, his voice laced with an underlying rage.
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    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • DaoistpRY7hg
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    Commented

    I’m curious if you will go back and explore the Black Death in a bonus chapter or two.

    Ch 79 Something Spontaneous
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    The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)
    Movies · Beans_on_a_tree
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  • DaoistpRY7hg
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    Replied to Beans_on_a_tree

    That’s fair are you to change any of the other cullens as well?

    [POV Carlisle///1640]
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    The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)
    Movies · Beans_on_a_tree
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  • DaoistpRY7hg
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    Commented

    Wasn’t he born in 1640? And turned in 1663?

    [POV Carlisle///1640]
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    The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)
    Movies · Beans_on_a_tree
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  • DaoistpRY7hg
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    Commented
    [Insert picture of Jabba the Hutt here]
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    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • DaoistpRY7hg
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    Commented
    Finally, Peter paused, his eyes fixed on a mask displayed prominently on a pedestal in the center of the room. 'The Mask of Darth Nihilus...' he read from his datapad, nearly overwhelmed by its dark aura. The malevolent energy pulsing from the mask made his decision swift. "Into the vault you go, no arguments," he said firmly, locking away the mask and feeling a weight lift off his shoulders.
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    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • DaoistpRY7hg
    DaoistpRY7hg26d
    Replied to Apathy_Personified

    Thanks for the reminder I’ve just changed it.

    Ch 2 Bio
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    Fantastic 4 Amalgam in Young Justice
    Anime & Comics · DaoistpRY7hg
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  • DaoistpRY7hg
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    Commented

    Kylorians (same race as Carina)

    Peter's eyes flicked across the screen, meticulously categorizing the living beings in the Collection. 'Fomalhauti's, Poppupian's, Xeronian's, Hurctarian's, Kylorian's, Frost Giant's, Chitauri, Dark Elves, and even a Sovereign Cocoon, whatever the hell that is…' He was determined to release those that weren't dangerous—a promise to himself and to his newfound sense of responsibility as the new owner of this odd assortment of galactic treasures.
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    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • DaoistpRY7hg
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    Commented

    Hurctarians

    Peter's eyes flicked across the screen, meticulously categorizing the living beings in the Collection. 'Fomalhauti's, Poppupian's, Xeronian's, Hurctarian's, Kylorian's, Frost Giant's, Chitauri, Dark Elves, and even a Sovereign Cocoon, whatever the hell that is…' He was determined to release those that weren't dangerous—a promise to himself and to his newfound sense of responsibility as the new owner of this odd assortment of galactic treasures.
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    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • DaoistpRY7hg
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    Commented

    Xeronians (this is the comic book version cause I didn’t know which to pick between cinematic or comic)

    Peter's eyes flicked across the screen, meticulously categorizing the living beings in the Collection. 'Fomalhauti's, Poppupian's, Xeronian's, Hurctarian's, Kylorian's, Frost Giant's, Chitauri, Dark Elves, and even a Sovereign Cocoon, whatever the hell that is…' He was determined to release those that weren't dangerous—a promise to himself and to his newfound sense of responsibility as the new owner of this odd assortment of galactic treasures.
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    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • DaoistpRY7hg
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    Commented

    Poppupians

    Peter's eyes flicked across the screen, meticulously categorizing the living beings in the Collection. 'Fomalhauti's, Poppupian's, Xeronian's, Hurctarian's, Kylorian's, Frost Giant's, Chitauri, Dark Elves, and even a Sovereign Cocoon, whatever the hell that is…' He was determined to release those that weren't dangerous—a promise to himself and to his newfound sense of responsibility as the new owner of this odd assortment of galactic treasures.
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    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • DaoistpRY7hg
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    Commented

    Fomalhauti

    Peter's eyes flicked across the screen, meticulously categorizing the living beings in the Collection. 'Fomalhauti's, Poppupian's, Xeronian's, Hurctarian's, Kylorian's, Frost Giant's, Chitauri, Dark Elves, and even a Sovereign Cocoon, whatever the hell that is…' He was determined to release those that weren't dangerous—a promise to himself and to his newfound sense of responsibility as the new owner of this odd assortment of galactic treasures.
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    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • DaoistpRY7hg
    DaoistpRY7hg27d
    Commented
    [Insert picture of Howard the Duck here]
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    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • DaoistpRY7hg
    DaoistpRY7hg27d
    Commented

    He was 21 when his parents died.

    But who could have predicted that his loving mother and strict father would face their end in a 'car crash' after he turned 16?
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    Stark Infinity
    Anime & Comics · marvel_stark
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  • DaoistpRY7hg
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    Commented

    Concept #3 (My Favourite)

    As Peter hurried after them, suddenly, a glint from one of the many shelves lining the room caught his eye—an object distinctly out of place among the bizarre and exotic collections. A Gray colored Holocron, its angular, illuminated design unmistakably calling to him.
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    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • DaoistpRY7hg
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    Commented

    Concept #2

    As Peter hurried after them, suddenly, a glint from one of the many shelves lining the room caught his eye—an object distinctly out of place among the bizarre and exotic collections. A Gray colored Holocron, its angular, illuminated design unmistakably calling to him.
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    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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