Nicolas_Carrasco

All good. I am happy to help, you’ve done very well so far.

Nice chapter

Nice chapter, I believe there is a spelling mistake in the last sentence though. You spelt beginning as begenning.

Nice chapter. Character growth for the win!

Thanks for the extra chapter 👍

Another nice, clear chapter. Keep up the good work.

Don’t change your writing just for me, write how you want too. I just wanted to let you know my honest thoughts so you have a second opinion on how your writings going.

Might have just been me but I felt like the conversation/visit with the gods was a bit difficult to follow. Otherwise nice chapter.

Well I’m glad you did. Mimics are so iconic.

Always a good story when mimics appear 🤪