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  • Nicolas_Carrasco
    Nicolas_Carrasco11mth
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    All good. I am happy to help, you’ve done very well so far.

    Ch 19 God of Elements - Volume 1 - Chapter 19: A Strange Group
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  • Nicolas_Carrasco
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    Nice chapter

    Ch 20 God Of Elements - Volume 1 - Chapter 20: New Sponsor
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  • Nicolas_Carrasco
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    Nice chapter, I believe there is a spelling mistake in the last sentence though. You spelt beginning as begenning.

    Ch 19 God of Elements - Volume 1 - Chapter 19: A Strange Group
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  • Nicolas_Carrasco
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    Nice chapter. Character growth for the win!

    Ch 18 God of Elements - Volume 1 - Chapter 18: Accumulated Emotions
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  • Nicolas_Carrasco
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    Thanks for the extra chapter 👍

    Ch 17 God of Elements - Volume 1 - Chapter 17: High Orc
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  • Nicolas_Carrasco
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    Another nice, clear chapter. Keep up the good work.

    Ch 16 God of Elements - Volume 1 - Chapter 16: Ice Accumulation and the Foolish Elf
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  • Nicolas_Carrasco
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    Don’t change your writing just for me, write how you want too. I just wanted to let you know my honest thoughts so you have a second opinion on how your writings going.

    Ch 15 God of Elements, Volume 1 - Chapter 15: Fallen Angel
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  • Nicolas_Carrasco
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    Might have just been me but I felt like the conversation/visit with the gods was a bit difficult to follow. Otherwise nice chapter.

    Ch 15 God of Elements, Volume 1 - Chapter 15: Fallen Angel
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  • Nicolas_Carrasco
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    Well I’m glad you did. Mimics are so iconic.

    Ch 14 God of Elements - Volume 1 - Chapter 14: Accidentally Entering a Dungeon
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  • Nicolas_Carrasco
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    Always a good story when mimics appear 🤪

    Ch 14 God of Elements - Volume 1 - Chapter 14: Accidentally Entering a Dungeon
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  • Nicolas_Carrasco
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    Cool ability. Another nice chapter. Good job!

    Ch 13 God of Elements - Volume 1 - Chapter 13: Ability Creation
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  • Nicolas_Carrasco
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    Only just over 10 chapters released but a great start to an interesting novel. Well written, excellent grammar, interesting main character and cool power system. Great start to a book for those interested in the reborn back before the Apocolypse system lovers.

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  • Nicolas_Carrasco
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    One word…… COOL!

    Ch 12 God of Elements - Volume 1 - Chapter 12: Class Selection and Evolution?
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  • Nicolas_Carrasco
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    Fun chapter!

    Ch 11 God of Elements - Volume 1 - Chapter 11: Traces of the Constellation
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  • Nicolas_Carrasco
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    Keep up the good work!

    Ch 10 God of Elements - Volume 1 - Chapter 10: At Least for a While
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  • Nicolas_Carrasco
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    Ok cool. That makes sense. Good luck with determining the numbers. Authors can tend to struggle with this when characters get high level.

    Ch 9 God of Elements - Volume 1 - Chapter 9: Elajiah's Wrath
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  • Nicolas_Carrasco
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    Another impressive chapter. Easy to read. A question I do have and I may have just missed it but do the characters have a set amount of mana or health somewhere? Just wanted to put into context how much stuff like 2500 mana per minute is for them.

    Ch 9 God of Elements - Volume 1 - Chapter 9: Elajiah's Wrath
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  • Nicolas_Carrasco
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    Nice chapter. Keep it up 👍

    Ch 8 God of Elements - Volume 1 - Chapter 8: Black Annis
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  • Nicolas_Carrasco
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    Another interesting chapter. Looking forward to what comes next.

    Ch 7 God Of Elements - Volume 1 - Chapter 7: Goddess #####
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  • Nicolas_Carrasco
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    Nice chapter. Have some power stones.

    Ch 6 God of Elements - Volume 1 - Chapter 6: The God System
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