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I_Dragon7dCommentedNo, she is not even a successful general. She simply lacks common sense.
I'm trying to think from the viewpoint of a General to understand her, but it's not going well. I have no idea of military tactics.- I_Dragon11dCommented
Wasn't that his 5th life?
Unfortunately, the attempt at good change in my heart backfired when my fragile ego and morality were hurt by the odd culture of that world. I betrayed my mother, and in a sense, I recreated the scene of my death at Lilithra's hands by killing Emmanuel. - I_Dragon11dCommented
That was a depressingly complicated situation. Making someone choose between their parents and their lover is cruel. Aqua met a tragic end during his 2nd life.However, things don't seem as simple as that. It is suspicious why the Demon Princess chose to kill Aqua so many years later, after he saved her, married her, and even had kids with her. There should be more to the story here.I hope you will provide closure to all of Aqua's lives, author. I have read your previous work, The Cursed Gamer. I think you should take things slow with this story, and not rush anything.I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Ch 148 [148] The Girl From the Song - I_Dragon1mthCommented
While the chapter and the writing itself was great, I can't help but feel there's an element missing somewhere. Like, it shouldn't have been the White Tiger Icon to make Aqua a Sage. Or, it shouldn't have been the only one. Moreover, the fact that Aqua's ascension occurred in the Underworld, in such a manner, doesn't sit well for some reason. It might be that the author is setting Aqua up for failure, or that the pacing feels rushed in general.To clarify, I've given my opinion to encourage discussion, and not disparage the novel. Thoughts on it would be welcome.
Ch 135 [135] Promise of Eternity - I_Dragon2mthCommentedCh 12 An Extreme Evil Spirit
- I_Dragon2mthCommented
It's fine, and please get well soon.
I'm sick, I have a very soar throat and my head is killing me, that I can't even look at this screen for too long so, I'll posting again when I feel better... - I_Dragon3mthCommented
I remember that quote. It's from the movie Edge of Tomorrow. That's a pretty memorable dialogue.
This book has been deleted. - I_Dragon3mthCommented
Nice imagery.
In Ddraig's view, he was resting in his white cage until a blood-red color stained the ground a few feet away from him as the wall cage to his right disappeared completely, causing his eyes to widen before getting up and leaving his cage. - I_Dragon4mthCommented
Insanely clever move there
Mem-Cho reached out a hand at me. "See, 'your' Akane is speechless. So I am your only choice now." - I_Dragon1yrReplied to GloriousMilfHunter
Okay, never mind ^^
A/N: Currently hovering between the rank 10 and 11. If maintain the top 10 until Sunday reset, I'll publish 3 bonus chapters. - I_Dragon1yrCommented
Isn't that too little, considering your words were about the novel reaching into the Top 40? Either way, being at such a high rank does not warrant just three bonus chapters. In the all time rankings, at that. I do not mean to come across as entitled, but this seems insufficient.
A/N: Currently hovering between the rank 10 and 11. If maintain the top 10 until Sunday reset, I'll publish 3 bonus chapters. - I_Dragon1yrCommented
New fic, here I come!
Chapter 1: Prologue: never trust Spam! - I_Dragon1yrCommentedDeath and talking to God
- I_Dragon1yrReplied to LanceSennin
That's pretty cool!
"I can't speak for the two of them, but I don't believe they're angry with you, either. After you left earlier, they left as well. Of course, you can talk to them and find out for yourself. Now," she folded her arms and went back to looking serious. "Is there anything else you wish to talk about, Ayanokouji-kun?" - I_Dragon1yrReplied to LanceSennin
May I know how you managed to get Amakano and Reminiscence in English?
"I can't speak for the two of them, but I don't believe they're angry with you, either. After you left earlier, they left as well. Of course, you can talk to them and find out for yourself. Now," she folded her arms and went back to looking serious. "Is there anything else you wish to talk about, Ayanokouji-kun?" - I_Dragon1yrCommented
Our MC is suffering from first world problems even in another world, it seems
Chapter 20: Victory Feels… Underwhelming - I_Dragon1yrCommented
Do not let low reviews deter your resolve, author! You're writing an enjoyable story, so have faith in yourself ^^ It is okay to deviate from the original, but the differences must be supplemented with logic. Also, you could have shown the MC's bond and level of compatibility with Eris through the mech duel here. However, the future war should prove as an excellent proving grounds for Leon and Eris ^^ Thanks for the double chapter release!
Ch 19 Chapter 19: 1v3 - I_Dragon1yrCommented
A double upload? You get my approval!
Chapter 19: 1v3