If this is your first novel, you are doing good. Best of luck for the future.I will be sticking to your book.( I was reading child of Destiny novel, then I came across this novel)
Thanks, you are the only one commenting, so I give you my utmost respect. Do you feel like it's getting boring cuz I feel like I am taking too much time to get into the storyline, which is why I skipped many conversations and parts.
Hello!, I am the author of this book. I don't have enough confidence to state that this novel will be decent, it will be an average(trash) read and I don't recommend anybody to read this unless they have nothing to read.
Resting in his bedroom, Drake heard the opening and closing sound of the door, causing his drowsy eyes to open. He sighed, looking up at the wooden ceiling above him.
I used to read many fanfictions in which the authors used commas outside of the quotation, and I learned from them. Well, I will edit the chapter later.
Thanks for the advice.
My phone had some major problems, which took them 3 days to repair.
Thanks for the reivew. I am not sure about adverb, it might took me a while to improve. But I did add comma to some places.
I will continue this book from today.