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Hemanta_Shakya8dCommentednah mate, you good no need to worry just keep posting more chaps
Is my grammar that bad? According to some feedback it is very difficult to read and breaks the flow of story.- Hemanta_Shakya10dCommented
oooo nice I like it +1
Yes - Hemanta_Shakya12dCommented
It's the only option my friends who agrees with me
3) Both - Hemanta_Shakya16dCommented
oooooo interesting
Yes - Hemanta_Shakya17dCommented
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MC Join fully the Straw hat after Enies Lobby arc and act like a badass like Escanor? - Hemanta_Shakya19dCommented
all fo the above..
Other (comment recommendations) - Hemanta_Shakya21dCommented
I the dialogue here should have been " I don't know, but let him cook." would have been noice
"I don't know, let's just wait and see," Kirishima said and shifted his focus on Yuta. - Hemanta_Shakya25dCommented
Well shall have her
Add Tohru. - Hemanta_Shakya26dCommented
when I first reason a fire protection potion, my thoughts went to minecraft potions, and though it was a coincide but now I have a question arthor, are you a minecrafter?
He nodded, then explained, "When we were mixing a swelling solution last year I threw a firecracker into Goyle's cauldron to create a diversion. Where the solution splashed people's arms, noses, eyes, etc. were enlarged grotesquely. Goyle's eyes got to be the size of dinner plates before Snape gave him the antidote. But how many people, aside from myself that is, carry deflating draught as a matter of routine? Even Snape only has his in a supply cabinet in his classroom, and then only when he thinks he might use it. So it struck me that the next time I'm attacked, if I were to splash this over my enemies, it ought to really make it easy to get away from danger." - Hemanta_Shakya1mthReplied to Hemanta_Shakya
and also as compensation I demand yes not ask, but outright demand 1 extra chapter 😇 next release whenever that it may be. peace out ✌️
(A/N: For those of you who haven't seen the notice in the synopsis, I changed my mind about Drew becoming a lover. I don't like harem or anything near it in a modern world setting, and it would be WAY too much drama to end up with her. So, sorry for those of you who don't like the idea, but it happened. So now, it's just Charmcaster.) - Hemanta_Shakya1mthCommented
meh, I'm cool with it as long as our mc is a menace to the society but in a good way.😉
(A/N: For those of you who haven't seen the notice in the synopsis, I changed my mind about Drew becoming a lover. I don't like harem or anything near it in a modern world setting, and it would be WAY too much drama to end up with her. So, sorry for those of you who don't like the idea, but it happened. So now, it's just Charmcaster.) - Hemanta_Shakya1mthReplied to Mart_Lopez
Humm author, I like the way your thoughts are going
Ray was used to be a hobbyist back in his old world with an interest of games from third person to first person shooters from Borderlands, COD, Destiny, Fallout, Starfield, Far Cry, Tom Clancy's franchise, Doom, Alien, Metro, Gears of war, and many more games related with guns or post apocalyptic games and also read some manga as well. But due to his current job giving him too many overtimes he died from his bed due to over exhaustion. And he was reincarnated in the U.S in the My Hero Academia Universe with his quirk he recreated many guns he have in his past life also admiring both its beauty and it's significance to the games he used to play. Now he is a well renowned vigilante many Villains and heroes want him behind bars or dead for two things, one he is annoying, and two he is making life worst for both side an absolute menace to hero society. - Hemanta_Shakya1mthCommented
Menace to the society you say ......🙂🙃 IM ALREADY HOOCKED
Ray was used to be a hobbyist back in his old world with an interest of games from third person to first person shooters from Borderlands, COD, Destiny, Fallout, Starfield, Far Cry, Tom Clancy's franchise, Doom, Alien, Metro, Gears of war, and many more games related with guns or post apocalyptic games and also read some manga as well. But due to his current job giving him too many overtimes he died from his bed due to over exhaustion. And he was reincarnated in the U.S in the My Hero Academia Universe with his quirk he recreated many guns he have in his past life also admiring both its beauty and it's significance to the games he used to play. Now he is a well renowned vigilante many Villains and heroes want him behind bars or dead for two things, one he is annoying, and two he is making life worst for both side an absolute menace to hero society. - Hemanta_Shakya1mthCommented
...+1
- Hunter x Hunter - Hemanta_Shakya1mthCommented
Adoption should be a better alternative. I mean, the mc mom is a great mother as she rejected the hero association bribe, which should be a lot, and this is just one example. 😉
(A/N: Hello readers once again! I hope you enjoyed the read, I did my best to release a fanfic update. I'm still recovering from the cold, but it's nothing that stops me from grabbing my phone and writing anything. Before I leave you here, I wanted to know if Eri should go to U.A. or be adopted by the MC's family? See you in the next update!) - Hemanta_Shakya2mthCommentedCh 17 Notice