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no, you wont have to pay

no, atleast not any time soon, by premium do you mean like you have to pay to read?.

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It’s a webnovel you won’t be able to see it but yeah

#4310

whats the name of your web novel?, and read my new chapter

kind of

Message me on discord xp_unit#4310 and thanks for the advice

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chill out

i fixed that

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Overall, your story "Rewind: Evil" is a fast-paced and action-packed adventure that follows a protagonist who gains incredible powers through a mysterious crystal. The plot is full of twists and turns, and the protagonist's descent into darkness and megalomania is well-portrayed. Your writing style is descriptive, and you do a good job of setting the scene and describing the action in detail. However, there are some instances where the dialogue feels a bit stiff and could benefit from more nuance and subtlety. Additionally, some readers may find the protagonist's actions and attitudes towards others to be unsympathetic and difficult to root for. However, this is ultimately a matter of personal taste, and others may find the protagonist's journey to be engaging and thought-provoking. Overall, "Rewind: Evil" is a well-written and entertaining story that is sure to captivate readers who enjoy action, sci-fi, and fantasy genres.