There's not much to say about the writing quality, there are no noticeable errors, and it flows easily. Since it's only 1 chapter, there's not much to comment on. But what bothered me the most was the excessive amount of point of view changes, this is good for building a background of the world, but it would be better to only have 1 or 2 in the same chapter, this would help to delve much deeper into the story with ease and keeping the world building going. For example, the first point of view was almost unnecessary due to how little was shown, but the others were excellent, laid the groundwork for the story and presented the characters and plot consistently. The novel has potential, if it maintains this quality, it will probably be very successful.

Thanks for the review, I'll see what I can improve.

He is and he is not at the same time there.

Yes, I did that, of course, it's still a fanfiction, but the energy system was basically created from scratch by me, I spent 2 whole months creating and scrapping several prototypes, this was the one that survived in the end. Thanks for the recognition, it's good to know that all my efforts had the effect they should have.