meowish

I grinded 2 weeks of that damn daily reward(I finally got free 24hours) :( I don't have any books to read, maybe I should find a good book

dang.. 2 years ago? how long did author neglect this great story idea. :(

though your idea is between good and bad, it's just the way you show it. (Sion uses thrust and kills bla bla) Author, You are like... just telling every action, add some mystery and spice down here

I don't see who is who? I saw () with names but are all of that talking to themselves or talking to people

For Dialogues, maintain quotation and this is kind of like... too much info, why are there numbers that explains it, don't pack yiur stuff too much.

Multiple paragraphs, no line breaks? it hurts my eye that I just skipped it.

looking at the names, hes probably a foreigner and settled in Philippines. same with "Samantha" and "Anna"

This defied my knowledge of MRE foods. It came from a system, welp atleast it has a heating element that gives off a good mouthful of food that is warm

MRE is a dried food package, so it decreases water inside your body after eating it , hence the 10x water bottles was granted. such a smart one, instead of being equal. It became fair

A doubtful princess, that is getting used as a pawn. To think she trusts the lies of royal guards, hope Ace is given a chance to fix things up