luiz_S

make it a thought for the love of god

I think that by the tenth time, we already get that he's talking to himself

Seriously? Is he really going to invest his time in a martial art that requires him to be drugged to use? He has a broken system for learning things, and he's going to try this?

Are you going to change anything compared to the other story? Because so far, it's basically the same thing. The other reincarnated person is there, and all the interactions with the Starks are the same. I don’t see the point in continuing if I’m just going to get more of the same.

The name of the person who posted this appears to be the same as the author on FF.net, so maybe it's him posting somewhere else

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Why not at the beginning? Romance helps move the story forward—it's one of the reasons why SAO is good.

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'' freedom in the working world''