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Bruh if you are going to write by using A.I. then make it less obvious. I am 43 chapters in, and it is painful how all the internal monologues are just repeated ideas in different wording. When other characters face off, like in chap 43, then it is obvious that an A.I. is narrating the emotions and dialogue. If you are not using A.I. then you are simply overdoing it - there are better ways to describe character emotions and development.

very nice! thanks for the chapter.

Haha! I love how he is misinterpreted the whole time!😂😂

I have read to chapter 70, and feel that the time spent was worth it. The premise and plot is really intriguing. The writing quality is also good, with little mistakes. I mostly like the characters and the OP feeling of the MC because sometimes novels just have plot armour or unsatisfied badassary, while this achieves that badass feeling and buildup.

thank you

This seems incredibly dangerous. By all accounts, it would mean that she would be able to manipulate time itself to some degree. I am starting to suspect that she is the A.I. that the galaxy fought all those millenia ago, and that she probably fostered her own existence into humanity and by extension to Erich.

Is 10 million not too much? A level 170 boss only gave 2 million. Does not make sense???

"Polite" yeah right😂👌 I hope like this development, she is best girl.

This is great. World development with the character development.👌