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Yes, but it seems the author has zero memory and doesn't understand how numbers work.
I've decided this entire world needs to die, someone call Cathulu and tell him it's lunch time.
Talent has NOTHING to do with if a serum designed to do a job does the job. If his cells had a deficiency/flaw that would make more logical sense. Please learn what words are and what they mean before you use them.
Because the plot go brrrr
...wow the is horrible, you have to be asleep to have a dream. Mind blown, I never would have known if not for this sentence sat as it's own paragraph...
Even a fodder ability of a technical final evolution of hollows should have zero effort to crush two full evolutions then him. Let's look at the series, Ichigo and Uryu took care of a Gillian in one strike. Neither seemed at all exhausted, bear in mind this is an ichigo and Uryu before the training for the Soul Society Arc. Now this MC uses his ability on the basically the same thing, even though he is technically a captain class being minimum, and 1/4 his energy to do it? That is nothing but the author making a cool ability with no plan on proper scaling for the future, realizing they messed up, but still liking the idea, and just saying: uhhhh it costs lots of energy so it's nerfed now, I don't need to think anymore.
What would you "oppress" the pressure limit of the heart so it can collapse? I still think from your above explanation you don't exactly get how oppression is used. The effect your going for is cool, but the title and name of the ability does not reflect it well, based on the very definition of the word.
I think you misunderstood what the term oppression actually means, and thus this ability just sounds dumb.
Well, two options here, if he's under 18, call the cops and have his parents arrested for throwing a minor out of the house and breaking the law, or if he's over 18, deal with it, man up, become someone 10x better then his dad and rub that in his face.
Cool, more casual abuse. Didn't Chloe magically see Vahn was absurd and had issues, and her first action is to mess with and verbally abuse the abused child.Tbh I hate this authors characterization of the people in this story. The author needs to either actually talk to people or visit a mental health expert if they think more abuse can help someone who is abused speak out and get over their trauma.
No to the stalker midget. This is honestly creepy AF.
She has no say in what a guest does if it's not breaking the law, and there is no law saying a guest in a party can't have another member over. BS is BS.
If you didn't do it, by definition, you are innocent.So random thot, GG go nxt.
This one
This is clearly four words, not one.
Cool wasted multiple chapters on a fight, with no ending just to act stupidly Chuni. I'll give it -10/10 stars waste of time.
Bruh, Chuni much?
You clearly do. All that meditation has done nothing for self reflection.
Huge waste of space. This is the same as the author repeating what has been said in the last chapter and, in many cases, failing to wax poetically about it.Actually, write something to further the story. Stop wasting time and inflating your word count.