Shame it got dropped, otherwise it was nice while it lasted

I swear, if this guy goes to cash in the bounty without a henge after hearing how connected this bandit was...

Unfortunately, this reads like an MTL. It makes it difficult to follow the story or fully grasp the concept behind it. Perhaps with a serious round of editing, it can show it's true potential

Severe lack of punctuation makes this irritating to read/listen to at times. The status screens are also a peeve of mine, sometimes feeling like they're half the content. It's not for me, but I can get how that's the whole point for others. Otherwise it's an interesting idea for an au fic. The concept has legs and I can only hope it gets a rework in future. It would elevate the work so much.

What a promising start! I also appreciate that the MC doesn't seem to be one of those evil for evils sake types. Looking forward to seeing how the story develops

At least I didn't imagine this not being tagged. It's been ages but tags would have been a nice little courtesy. Oh well

So, Naruto is a hoe and all the women are cougars? Okay then 😅

Ah, forgot why I had stopped this 😂

I guess this must be a Chinese novel translation, given the tropes and randomly Chinese names. Still, as far as MTLs go, enough context makes it through for those familiar with Naruto to fill in the blanks. Some manual intervention may have been made or a better translator was used. As far as the storyline goes, it's okay. The main Idea is interesting and It leans towards the comedic side of things. It definitely depends on head canon interpretations of characters and their motivations and adds cultivation novel mechanics. If that will Agravate you, just go ahead and skip it. Otherwise, if you can dedicate a few extra brain cells to smooth out the weirdness, it's an ok read. It would be infinitely better if the translator also dedicated a little time a day to run Find and Replace on each chapter to fix the obvious translation issues.

This has always been a frenetic title but things really went to another level this time. Perhaps in time, that can be edited out but yeah, this is wild.

Apologies if the text isn't rendering properly. On the backend, it looks perfect, but here, spaces randomly disappear! All I can think of is copying text directly from Grammarly might be causing issues. I'll try and fix it later when I have the chance.

Hammer Man! Hammer! Hammer Man! Hammer!

Alrighty! No much to say here. This is a face slapping, world conquering cultivation novel in Naruto cosplay. If you are into that, this is the right place for you. Translation Quality is a big letdown. It reads like an MTL that had one rough editing pass. It would benefit massively from a human editor familiar with Naruto, and then maybe an AI pass to smooth grammar over

Abhorrent MC, but I guess it fits with the story the author wants to tell. Bonus points for the ultra rare use of Psyren. A great shonen manga that ended up near forgotten.

I probably missed the "age ain't nothing but a number" chapter as it played on text to voice, so pardon my confusion. MC is a 26ish year old soul who spent who knows how long in between lives before transmigrating into a 10 yr old and is currently outwardly 15-16, right? Rumi should be no more than 25 right? And nezu and the other powers see no issue in putting a minor in care of this seemingly barely legal couple? I guess I'm too basic or something

just deleted my original comment, but I will say this: Decisions made here make it difficult for me to continue as the logic escapes me. I'll give it a few more chapters but...

lol, at least its a back handed affirmation that they believe he will indeed get that big truck eventually!

Han supremacy

I could not get through this story even though it brings up an interesting concept. It is written in a style that is incredibly heavy on exposition to the point of having negligible dialogue in the first few chapters. It's like the author got so carried away with setting the table they forgot to serve the dinner.

Author has been going heavy on this. Where is this heading?