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_Slayer_13_

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2023-02-03 JoinedGlobal
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    _Slayer_13_5d
    Replied to Usman_Arshad_4627

    I am really trying to ,you can see in the upcoming chapters the paragraph shortens but I will improve

    It was normal busy day in the city, as usual some were going to work some were doing something else and lucas who didn't know about his upcoming danger was just going to his college to get lectured by his proffesor as he missed his classes for 4 day straight just because he was busy playing all Pokemon games he was an otaku usually staying in his rented apartment and watching anime and now these days he was fascinated of pokemon games so he taught of playing all the pokemon games without a break and now he has finished playing them he had finally came out of his apartment to attend his lectures as he was about to take the bus to his college suddenly he saw an crazy truck coming in his way from his eyes the truck looked like saying with shit eating grin that here I come one more otaku to kill and that's all lucas saw before darkness enveloped him and all left was his consciousness in a very vast dark space and his consciousness floating in that space and after some long time he felt like something was sucking him away from that place as lucas was bored he just jumped in that sucking force and got sucked and after opening his eyes what he saw all was blinding light straight coming to his eyes and the after some time the light got dissipated and then he saw that he was in a jungle and he felt like he was not in his body so to check where he was he started checking his Sorrounding and after waking for some minutes he found a lake sa he was thirsty from that walk he walked towards the lake to drink some water as the water in lake looked cean and clear and when he reached the lake the first thing he saw was his image and image matched well with a character he has seen in an anime and that was brock and after seeing his image lucas was shocked that he was in brock body or body who's face looks exactly like brock from pokemon and then calming down a little he drank the water from the lake and then he started thinking where he fiirst thing he knew was that he was dead and he was in another world and somehow he his in the body of brock or a person that exactly looks like brock then tried to recall the previous memories of the body and then he got a sudden headache that was very painful but after some some time the headache varies away and lucas opens his eyes and started jumping as he was happy about that he was in pokemon world and in the body of brock then after calming down from his happy state he started feeling sorry for the original rock as he was dead by getting caught by a wild pinsir when he was travelling and suddenly that pinsir attacked him by giving him a tackle which blew him out he hit a sharp stone in his head whick led to blood loss and ending his life that's why he was still feeling dizzy and then he occupied rocks body now after organising his memory and taking a good rest lucas Or rock thought of going ot of the viridian forest as he was in viridian forest as rock wanted something from forest qnd then after carefully moving out from the forest he reached pewter city.
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  • _Slayer_13_
    _Slayer_13_6d
    Replied to Rebel_Royal5

    Thanks bro I will use your advice but i write on my laptop and in laptop 3 lines become 6 lines in mobile so i will adjust but Thank you

    After reaching deep forest and getting exhausted by walking so much brock decided to reat a little and called chansey back as she happily came back and sat beside him in the rock that brock was sitting, then after resting brock decided to continue his search for good pokemon because only pokemon he found till now was metapod, beedrill, weedle, etc all bug type pokemon he found and he was not interested them for now after walking a little ge heard a little of some pokemon so he asked chansey that she also heard that little cry and chansey said yes by nodding her head and started going to that direction as chansey in nature are very helpful and they cannot see anybody injured so she followed the voice to treat pokemon and brock also followed her , reaching that place were thecry was coming from they found that it was a shiny mankey laying there all beaten up, it looks like that other mankey beat him up by ganging on him because he didn't look like them .
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  • _Slayer_13_
    _Slayer_13_6d
    Commented

    I tried the shortening paragraph I hope you like it and please give me tips to improve my grammar

    Ch 8 Getting Boulder badge
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  • _Slayer_13_
    _Slayer_13_6d
    Replied to Rebel_Royal5

    something like that always forget to end paragraph do you know any idea how to end it in short

    After reaching deep forest and getting exhausted by walking so much brock decided to reat a little and called chansey back as she happily came back and sat beside him in the rock that brock was sitting, then after resting brock decided to continue his search for good pokemon because only pokemon he found till now was metapod, beedrill, weedle, etc all bug type pokemon he found and he was not interested them for now after walking a little ge heard a little of some pokemon so he asked chansey that she also heard that little cry and chansey said yes by nodding her head and started going to that direction as chansey in nature are very helpful and they cannot see anybody injured so she followed the voice to treat pokemon and brock also followed her , reaching that place were thecry was coming from they found that it was a shiny mankey laying there all beaten up, it looks like that other mankey beat him up by ganging on him because he didn't look like them .
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    _Slayer_13_12d
    Replied to Astro_Mysti_Cat

    what will crytal onix evolve to ??

    After that he released the pokemon from the pokeball and a chansey came out which was looking very good and healthy with it's above average height of 3'9" Brock was very happy to get the chansey and chansey was also happy to get it's new trainer so ahe hugged him and after that brock told her about how they were going to be together from now on and they will go to the best and craziest adventure and enjoy their time together to which chansey was very happy about also get excited to go to adventure with brock .
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  • _Slayer_13_
    _Slayer_13_12d
    Replied to StevenWar

    I know and i will really try to improve and thanks for your comment about the story

    Ch 2 Starting new journey witout pokemon?
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  • _Slayer_13_
    _Slayer_13_13d
    Replied to Hymaster986

    Yeah it was but now it is not has new brock that lucas gave it back as he wanted to form new team and i don't like onix that much but what do you think about crystal onix

    After that he released the pokemon from the pokeball and a chansey came out which was looking very good and healthy with it's above average height of 3'9" Brock was very happy to get the chansey and chansey was also happy to get it's new trainer so ahe hugged him and after that brock told her about how they were going to be together from now on and they will go to the best and craziest adventure and enjoy their time together to which chansey was very happy about also get excited to go to adventure with brock .
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  • _Slayer_13_
    _Slayer_13_18d
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 26 Chapter 26 - Danzo...you bastard
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    Commented

    TFTC Welcome back and calm our hunger by giving more chapter

    Ch 25 Chapter 25 - Got a jar?
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    _Slayer_13_28d
    Commented

    Ya she should help her by holding together "unity is strength"

    Could Kotonoha really hold onto such a man?
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    _Slayer_13_1mth
    Commented

    When is the new chapter coming

    Ch 23 Chapter 23 - Training partners
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    Commented

    You don't power up your opponent

    "Yes, Kakashi and that guy Obito." Kyomu once again dashed forward, "Minato-niisan, can you bring Obito to Kakashi's house?"
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    _Slayer_13_1mth
    Commented

    Is issei dead , did he extract the boosted gear

    Ch 15 The Overseer of Bucharest (2)
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  • _Slayer_13_
    _Slayer_13_1mth
    Commented

    This gives some crazy yandere vibes if not tamed then it will become a crazy problem as she is an apostle and with church power she will try to make him her slave or plaything.

    "You can only be mine~♥♥♥!!"
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    _Slayer_13_1mth
    Commented

    shirone is totally becoming like her sister

    "Should have left me." 
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  • _Slayer_13_
    _Slayer_13_1mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chpater

    Ch 23 Chapter 23 - Training partners
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  • _Slayer_13_
    _Slayer_13_1mth
    Replied to VoidPriestess

    me 9

    The woman had blonde hair and slightly pale face, her arms and legs wrapped in bandages and even on her forehead a bandage wrapped.
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    _Slayer_13_1mth
    Commented
    'This naughty cat.' 
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    Commented
    "Oh, he likes men." She said, "And he really really likes you."
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  • _Slayer_13_
    _Slayer_13_1mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter and can we get more update

    Ch 21 Chapter 21 - Partial acceptance..
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