Magkus

So true.. At this point he is just slaving for Targaryens despite being all powerful..

Wt f are you talking about? Chapters locked? When? Where?

Writing Quality - Not the best but not bad either. There are spelling mistakes and few inconsistencies here and there but it's ok. (4.2⭐) Story Development - Going Okay for now. It's a AU and author is doing good job. (4⭐) Character Development - This Kevin is different and I like it. He is willing to go to lengths and that's the best thing about him. The character of Gwen and Ben is portrayed correctly as well. Though you need to refine the character of side character a bit like I don't even understand what's on going about Melanie and those other plumber guys. World Background - Author is going for a more comprehensive World and that's good. (4.5⭐)

I hope that the next protagonist will have some brain.

Whoa Whoa Whoa.. that's lot of damage.

The funny thing is he is not even wrong. But he is brain dead if anyone will believe him.

I really like this elder

Benign --> Benjen (I think)

Tftc