Between Emperor and Saint Realm

Your excuse as comparing Mc to be the same as how Kaneki was in the beginning as weak doesn’t make sense at all. Firstly Kaneki was oblivious to everything and didn’t know how to use his powers whereas our Mc has watched Tokyo Ghoul and should know how to use his powers. Mc is just getting straight up nerfed because of ignorance

How did they solve the Merger issue between Lizzie and Josie

Hope all is well Author-kun. I fell in love with the potential this story could have been a literal 100 chp minimum continuing with the development of the Mc and his family throughout the years. I really hope that you bring this back from hiatus and continue with the story please. Also if you bring this back please remove the part with the god asking him to fight a dragon and rewards him the dimensional traveling powers. That isn’t really needed for this type of book, it make be necessary for legacies if you have the Mc marry Hayley and let Hope become his child.

It’s all fun and games compelling to get a experience car free, until auditing is done and they realize it was stolen

•Mc suppose to be a reincarnation with memories but it didn’t feel that way. •The story just stalling on the kamina arc as the author seems to be indecisive on whether to kill Matt before Gerard does or not, given the multiple failed attempts (which were total pointless as he could have killed him from the beginning) it seems Gerard would kill him. •The Mc character development came to a complete halt after his breakup with Quinn and he keeps becoming more distant as the chapter goes on. This is also disappointing as he’s a “reincarnator” with knowledge but doesn’t utilize it. •Why is he so fucking weak he’s a bloody hybrid for fucks sake. But whenever he’s in battle with a hunter all he does is talk mighty, breaks 2 hunters necks before being gunned down. And why would he go confront Peter so stupidly in the hospital •Lastly this story is being dragged by fishing for too many unnecessary drama. Mc forever in a sulking mood over a breakup that occurred months ago, the repeated failures in kill Matt(this should have been done the following chapter after Chase was outside his house), the major foreshadowing rift between Chase and Allison where I’m sure that in the following chapters there gonna have a big fight for what he did to her mother which would escalate cuz of MCs edgy behavior. •Say it again Mc is reincarnated let his memory run normal and whenever something happens to him he mysteriously remembers which part of the show he’s in.

I’m not sure but this first time interaction seems a little forced. Any person who watched Orginals would have know that Marcel wouldn’t allow him to meet hope so easily also being a total stranger and he would have been attacked immediately after mentioning her

What a looney tunes moment 🤣🤣

Now all the author needs to do is rewrite the novel and remove that entire “grimore of Sin” BS. I know that creativity is what makes these novels good but too much creativity just ruins too many things as being not necessary.

So chapter 6 and it already seems that the Mc is gay. Cuz I’m trying to figure out why would you use the plot with the pen which starts the love connection but only to reject her. The build up portrayed in the previous chapter was totally misleading. It would have best of you mentioned that his love interest were Danny, Jackson and Alpha Twins in first chapter

Allison is always the main girl please don’t say Lydia or Malia. Unless you’re going after Erica

This maths ain’t working. You stated that MC was 3 years old when you introduced Shisusi to the story, followed by a 4 year time skip you mention where he is present. So how do you get 5 years???? Mc should be 7

Thought Mc was gonna be the one to turn Erica

Was good but then went straight to the gutters. You really fucked it up by making him lose his alpha power and dying just to show to make reasons on why he’s a true alpha????? I’m not even an writer and come with better ways that shit show you displayed.

Not sure but this chapter felt repetitive. You started off at a point then jumped to a flashback to start all over again from where you began the chapter. Should have started the chapter with a flash back then continue with present

Feeling like the proper realms should have been: Body transformation Spirit transformation Core formation Nascent Soul Origin King Emperor Saint Dominion Immortal Transcendent

Sigh it could have been worse. Atleast we didn’t get a reincarnator with a system

It’s getting really annoying how Mc is just changing the plot and bring characters to his side. It would have been good if you allowed Damon and Stefan to continue without MCs interference and allowed them to meet present day in Mystic Falls

No matter which fanfic I read, whenever it comes to Stiles lines his voice always appears in my mind saying them🤣

Tried my best but has to stop reading around chapter 181. The characters development that author keeps mentioning was little to non existent and the story just became shambles by sending him to another universe. So many things that only leads to questioning. 1. He’s aware of black bolts powers and flying is one of them but yet I comes across that he’s ignorant about it. 2. Why does he have to be all mysterious in the injustice universe???? All he needed to do was find Batman and explain his predicament also using his memories to solve the situation. (Use Flashpoint as an example) Appreciate your work but this story would have been much better if you didn’t give the MC traumatic fears as well as delaying his ability development. Being a travel with knowledge he should have atleast had a way or starting point in developing his powers. He should have atleast been able to whisper upon joining young justice.