Jandro123

Ironwood?

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Has been very enjoyable so far; please don't drop and keep cooking, Mr.Author! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . shaboing

Don't pressure yourself with always catering to your readers wants; this is YOUR story, so what's the point of writing if you don't get to write what you want? If you don't make good smut, write more to improve. Your first story will never be perfect. I'm personally enjoying your story, and I thought the smut wasn't that bad, tbh. Keep doing what you're doing, and don't let the haters get to you. That's how a lot of authors quit.

missed opportunity to say that the bunny needs her carrot or sum shi

When he causes pain, he can use thought acceleration on the person getting hit so that they can feel that pain for however long the thought acceleration lasts. For example, if he can accelerate his thoughts so that 1 second=1 day, then the one second he takes to punch Deidara is equal to feeling the pain of being punched for one day straight. This was explained in the Tensura novels, I'm pretty sure, but it's a small detail.