Anime_Guy_0186

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this is all so forced, if not for the author the MC would of just made everyone forget what happened, it would be trivial for Jean, Charles or anyone with the same power

if his dna changes to simulate the X gean, then the detection devices should also work on him as it makes no sense otherwise, you can't have two devices that work on the same detection method but only have one of them work on the MC, the mutant suppression devices work by suppressing the X gene not the powers, the diversity in mutant powers would make it impossible to suppres more then one power at a time and the only common factor all mutants have is the X gene, this is why I say that the detection device should work on him if the power suppression device works unless there's something I'm missing.

you can probably get an idea of the timeline, considering New York's attack hasn't happend yet

I hope you have a good explanation because he shouldn't be able to keep the powers if he doesn't somehow create the means to store and generate the power from it's source X gene, it can't work like AFO quirk because unlike the quirk factor the X gene is different for each mutant so for MC to logically retain the powers he would have to create the corresponding gene or simulate it but then he shouldn't be immune to the detectors if that's the case

what a joke. You have turned an OP omega mutant into a B rated vigilante like green arrow, punisher, Luke kage and all those other trash TV Shows, seriously you(author) have the imagination of a fkin spud, all the things you can do with the MC and you go this route, this fic had potential for something good but it's often the case when an author falls short of delivery, hopefully something changes and it doesn't feel like I'm watching iron fist(trash show)

I'm sorry but did you rather "the fierce loyaltyin Rons eyes" the same guy that turned his back on Harry during the TWT and all the other times he was a cunt too Harry or jealous of him, not loyalty my friend

easy... the author can't write and most certainly doesn't know English well

I'm already put off with this fic, If the 6 year old is the dominant personality, then wtf is he behaving like a mature teen that has life experience hiding/controlling his emotions and why would a 6 year old have the reason or fear to hide a 2nd spirit, it said he got fragmented memories of a modern world but the way it was explained wouldn't influence his behaviour to such an extent as he is behaving like he's been reincarnated like the protagonist, his behaviour just doesn't match with his life experience or the information given and this is the foundation of a MC and the fic so it's already looking bad

this is just dumb now. who just gives away a VS sword when he doesn't even have one himself? What next will he give away the armour to someone he practically just meet, this MC is a joke