another ML that goes overboard with punishments...She didn't break a contract rule so why so harsh ? 1 simple rule break and now she cooks for him without a definite end date so it's a lifetime cook for me sentence ... the sleep alone would have been enough , and now he says time for your punishment aka not the real punishment since he asked her to bed to annoy her , i dont remember that being in the list of punishments .I feel like he isn't as sweet as the synopsis led me to believe , why do 9/10 MLs i see love to just punish FLs , it's like they have a punishment kink.

idk , 29 chapters in i was hoping he would redeem himself somehow but so far he seems selfish and self-centred , from what i see she is just a trophy to obtain for him at any cost like a collectable piece , he certainly bedded countless women and then proceeds to threaten the FL into marriage with him , I suspect it will take too long for him to redeem himself if he ever will since it seems the FL is for whatever reason having feelings for a man like that , maybe she always wanted someone to dominate her , probably the case but not the romance i am into .Someone like him deserves a wake up call , once again in most stories he would be the villain we all hope and pray to see his downfall.

blackmail , nice one ML , so u don't even like her enough to attempt to win her heart , instead u resort straight to blackmail cuz u are too insecure to even attempt to court the proper way and be rejected ...

already disappointed in this ml , seems like another one of those to lie and abuse his status and power to get a woman he wants whether she likes it or nothe is what most would consider the villain in other stories yet I'm supposed to root for him now

I swear i will lose my mind FFS all this ====== come on author think of ppl who listen to this ok TTS I'm so close to dropping this story purely cuz of the cancer equals

strange , is the sister human ? cuz she said herself she is a vampire , if she is of royal blood and it's always implied they are stronger or just overall better than normal vampires then how was she overpowered ? better yet how was she knocked out with one single punch in the face ?I guess strong genes never go to females in the vampire race if it's so easy to defeat a princess hmmmmm

this better be in the list of rules , to not move anything , the woman worked here for 3 years so I expect her to be aware of this...

Only bother if u want a trash male lead who mind controlls the FL into marriage against her will , also it is implied he is some old creature grandpa forcing wedding with a young woman , amazing plot ...I know i only read 5 chapters but man the start is horrible , no world building and the plot moves straight into the ML walking all over the FL , no communication no explanation just straight up mind controlled into marriage and acting as if the FL is simply an object with no mind of her own , sorry but no....

As feedback , not that it will get read anyway , would ne nice if author notes were not in the actual chapter , when u TTS it takes u out of the story to hear them every time , others add them in a dedicated section or a comment to not be intrusive , just my opinion , i for one am a casual reader and don't wanna keep up with out of the story updates

she should have used more words on the vial imo , just back to life and hold memories with a beating heart isn't fullproof , he could hold future and not past memories , he could be a different being , what if he was brought back to life without being healed as a half decomposing corpse since the mention of "healed" wasn't spoken , he could have simply been alive just to die from the same injury again , a small error imo in the writing for such an important moment Vincent even pointed to be careful with what she says yet she barely spoke 3 demands , beating heart , alive , memories

I will pretend he paid 700 coins cuz otherwise the logic of this world falls apart , I hate it when authors just throw random big numbers with no justification , going from 50 to 700000 gold is absurd , FL even said that can fund a whole kingdom yet no one will question where that money goes or what implications it will have ... Also I hope there will be an explanation of why so far everything is moving faster than the original plot , can't be blamed on the good old butterfly effect since so far the FL didn't do enough to justify the plot speeding up For example in her family dinamic she changed nothing so why do they meet the baron sooner ?

pretty dumb of her to assume it's infinite power , why would she fly unprepared ? for the first time she should assume she doesn't know how it works and not take such a dumb risk she basically went on to commit suicide >.>

why do MLs always think it's romantic to force someone to sleep with them against their will x.x she clearly didn't want to and did it cuz she was status pressured , I bet he identified her as his mate somehow one-sided but since he didn't tell her it's still wrong imo He could have respected her enough to use a different room or bed for at least 1 day , use the couch of make a bed on the ground with blankets , anything ... :( From our point of view as readers I guess it may seem cute but from hers it's creepy

weird so far I find it hard to believe an alpha in wolf form is slower and was able to lose a woofless human in the forest , he should outspeed her by a lot and smell her too , why call his beta and gamma , makes him feel powerless also the harvest moon event thingy could have used more detail cuz so far there is no world building so it's hard to place what happens , where , and what are the reactions of others , feels rushed I hope it gets better , I suppose u just wanted to rush the ML introduction asap , basically there was no buildup supposedly all the packs gathered for this festival , so it was the perfect chance to do world building but it was all skipped

how old is the female lead atm ? around 10? if so ruby can't be a woman since she as stated is only 5 years older , she is just a teenager , feels wrong to call her woman

why bother with the snake , a human can easily go 1 day without eating , he even said she can walk out and the only thing stopping her is rain ... Also he sure is stupid going to sleep and doing nothing at all for hours about the wound , I guess he was tired of living huh Idk I hoped for more depth but the story so far is kinda lacking , I mean it's not that bad but a bit of logic ruins it all , that's what I mean by no depth

I'm so confused , what is this start , 40 years of marriage soooo assuming they married at 18 earliest they are now 58 yo or older , and the mother shows up who is in her 80s , how tf is her mother scolding like that a 58 yo woman ? why is she in there if she obviously hates the daughter , who let her in or she lives with them ? at that age ? I don't get this , they all seem to act like a mother and her 20yo daughters but it's not So I guess this story will follow someone of grandma mental age having a relationship with a guy in his 20s hmmm , that's already creepy The author should have made this a plot of 5 or 10 years so the MC is in her 30s , then the whole mother act would make more sense and the MC mental age wouldn't be that of a grandparent