hello author i liked the novel but it it too short than the other you have written and character and story need more development. over this is a good novel. can you write next novel on gojo satoru with six eyes power and also sharigan power. and immortallity etc. powers . character should be an alpha mc. pls i wanna read a story like that in the world of omniverse.

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Change the name to Ashborn author it is cool . and sound better than atem

Why don't you change the Mc name to Ashborn It is cool name and better than the apex and rudeus.

well she is that bad . she want love but she didn't get that in the past . she became like this because she was only used by the others. and because of the odr prophecy she search her love like mad person.

the dialogue of Gilgamesh wasn't mammal it was mongrel . please correct it and write mongrel .

he wasn't a chad . he was a herbivore person. or you can a innocent kid. he wasn't affected by the beauty of Freya because he has a charm resistance EX level which means he can resist the charm of goddess with ease.

Why not just make it a harem . Do you really need to give him one night stand with no strings attached. It will make a bad Main character who will regret choosing one woman and ignoring what he had done with the others . Why are not creating a harem for him girls like Gwen are most important character in the fanfic. You just said in the beginning he will get atleast two woman but here you are on making him get only one woman . And that is not even Gwen who is the Important part of every ben 10 series. And Alistair is not human why he have to care for morales . You have made gwen like Alistair. She is the first girl he met and you are saying she is not a female lead for MC . And charmcasteer hasn't even made an appearance for the MC . And fanfic is progressing so slow . So for the last time make it a harem or add Gewn as his woman. Because Alistair has taken the place of kevin 11 and no matter how you look at it he is the best for gwen. From thier interaction in fanfic gwen likes Alistair and she is hot in the future. Why do you not add her to the female lead. And in the start of fanfic you said there will be two love interest for mc basically a harem . And drew Saturday was there but now look what has happened you cancelled that plan and said single female lead . Author You cant even keep your promise and said that i dont want to ntr Saturday. So atleast choose Gwen and charmcasteer as love interest for him . Because first of all gwen is genius in studies and magic and they both get together very well in the fanfic as shown . And the thing Alistair done for ben giving him speech had sure made her like him and in the future she will be hot as hell. So why not add her into the harem . Like Charmcasteer as well . And both are magical girls . Many will want to see the progress of their rrelation . Relationship Between Gwen and Alistair and Charmcasteer. At leat give what you promised. And as you noticed Alistair thrist for power is growing so she can become his seal so he dont go committing any crime such as killing innocent for power . This may make him into a villan no less than vilgax and any other alien. So pls reconsider making him a harem . So he don't lose himself in the search for power and kill innocent.

Hey author why don't you add Gewn to the harem or Choose Gwen as the Female Lead she should be the best female lead you know. And one of the most important thing she is the one who has spent more time with Alistair. And many fan of this fanfic dont want to see Gwen with Kevin 11 . And in this Fic ben regard Alistair as his friend and Alistair has taken the role that was supposed to be kevins . All i can say to you that is Gwen is the best for female lead If you can add Charmcasteer to Alistair family . That will be the best. And most of people don't want's to see Kevin 11 in the fanfic with Gwen you have to solve this problem. Otherwise it will be the awkward for Alistair. Pls reconsider this and add gwen as the female lead alongside charmcasteer. Many fans want to see this . And i know you are the author but pls reconsider this. Nobody want's to see romance between kevin 11 and gwen . On the other hand many are excited to see romance between Alistair and gwen and charmcasteer. And being with gwen will put him in the good books of the Tennysons .

Hey why the hell is rath giving him a lesson. The story isn't going to develop like this if all there are chapters like this like the conversation between ben and Alistair. There are many chapters like this and the Female lead hasn't shown up . Why don't you the author add gwen into the female lead alongside charmcasteer. It will be interesting development. Many people like to see this .

Hey author why don't you make gwen lover of Alistair. She is good as a female lead . Because charmcasteer hasn't even been shown in the fanfic and hasn't even interacted with Alistair. And gwen is the first girl he met and she also liked him because he is handsome. Isn't it better to make her his partner. And both are smart people. Isn't it good to see them together in the fanfic . Both are smart people. And if charmcasteer become the female lead then relation between gwen and charmcasteer hasn't been good in the cartoon shown. And he have to take a side between them . I think gwen is a better choice. Well the final say goes to you. You are the author. But please reconsider it.

Hey author why don't you make gwen Alistair lover instead of charmcasteer ? Charmcasteer hasn't even shown up until now. I think gwen might be the better choice for lover for Alistair. Because she is the first girl he saw and met in the fanfic. And also she is also blushing sometimes while talking to Alistair and she likes him. Please reconsider it. And thanks for the chapter.

Hi i liked the fanfic it is one of the best fanfic i have read . I would like you to continue this fanfic . It is interesting to read a fanfic like this . I request you to continue this work. The character development is not very favorable but still it is okay . Pls start writing this fanfic its benn more than 10 months since it is updated.

It is a good novel. For those who like harem it is one of the best novel you can ask for . It is very well maintained novel. There is good amount of harem and action in the novel .

Hi. This is one of the best fanfic of dulolo dalu i have seen . Please don't drop it . Many fans like me read this novel every day. Nd pls continue the story . And update it daily.

Keep working on it , it is a good fanfic

Man i so wanted to see limitless and six eyes techniques. At least give him six eyes . The poor MC is so weak now . He need some original abilities from gojo

The novel is good . But will there be Character from DMC and What will be the relationship of dante and jean will be in the future. Will there be romance between them and will DMC shop exist.