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  • Pucker_face
    Pucker_face7mth
    Replied to Dark_Scholars

    I will check it out, thanks for taking my constructive criticism and hope you continue to grow as a writer. Good luck😁

    Atlantis: The Twilight of the gods [BL]
    LGBT+ · Dark_Scholars
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  • Pucker_face
    Pucker_face7mth
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    As much as I enjoyed this book, i can't help but feel disappointed, it started out strong and midway it began to feel rushed. It has an amazing and captivating storyline, this book could have easily been 500 chapters and wouldn't feel like it was dragging instead it would have been more fleshed out, and could have reached it's full potential . I really love the charactes and wished the author put more attention on characters like ozais, lux and even xaloc family, like what happened to them? , a lot felt unfinished. At a point the book became all tell and no show . The war and final battle was beyond disappointing, the author just told us the battle was hard and ares, Selena and the other guy died nothing more, and the revenge fell flat xalox didn't even kill nora who practically killed him in the beginning. All in all so much wasted potential especially the school arc, the romance was the only saving grace and it felt rushed too but i like how mature it also felt.

    Atlantis: The Twilight of the gods [BL]
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  • Pucker_face
    Pucker_face8mth
    Commented

    i have never even spoken to mine😂😭

    "It's not good for girls to get a muffin top and then cry about it to everyone. Ask the hostess for an apple or something," he said and this was one of the few times he had actually said something to her. They didn't look like half-siblings, neither did they treat each other like half-siblings but they were most certainly acting like half-siblings right now. 
    Saving the Heartthrob Frenemy
    LGBT+ · Andru_9788
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  • Pucker_face
    Pucker_face8mth
    Commented

    you may look pretty but trust me your character is pretty ugly 🙂

    Lee Ya picked at her fingers with the back of her hand brushing against Qie Xieling's arm before continuing, "Is it because I am not good enough that you distance yourself from me?" As she spoke her eyes were watery like she was going to cry at any moment. "Am I that ugly? Is that it?" she continued to say and Qie Xieling couldn't bear it anymore. 
    Saving the Heartthrob Frenemy
    LGBT+ · Andru_9788
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  • Pucker_face
    Pucker_face8mth
    Commented

    It's reminding me of that witch from saving the overbearing ceo, do they ever learn😂😭

    The old man looked distressed as he said to her, "Ah-Lei, dad knows you love that scum but Luo Shih is not easy to deal with. Old man Luo left us in a mess when you got married. Dealing with her is like stepping into a landmine field with no knowledge of where they are buried. I will continue suppressing Bigan for you," but she wasn't satisfied. If her father wouldn't deal with her then she would take matters into her own hands.
    Saving the Heartthrob Frenemy
    LGBT+ · Andru_9788
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  • Pucker_face
    Pucker_face8mth
    Replied to Prithvi_Raj_7152

    pls, it's giving Nigerian schools😭😂

    "Keep talking and I will give the entire class double the assignment," said teacher Zhu and the entire class turned on Qie Xieling. They were always swapped with tests and assignments with sports on top of that. Nobody wanted any more unnecessary work.
    Saving the Heartthrob Frenemy
    LGBT+ · Andru_9788
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  • Pucker_face
    Pucker_face1yr
    Replied to Dawn_Nightingale

    Exactly, assassins shouldn't be this trusting, actually no one should be this trusting.

    Kevin, who had remained tense until now, decided to take advantage of this moment and let himself go against Axel's body, he ended up confessing to him : "This body is not mine, I come from another world where magic doesn't even exist … Do you want the long version or the short version ?"
    My Mage System (BL)
    LGBT+ · CeliaNaya
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