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Stormsdarkangel1yrCommentedIt would make you the kind that found his fated mate. 🙄
If there was one thing my father taught me from an early age, it was that an alpha never went back on his word. If I was to take back my promise to my fiancée, what kind of alpha would that make me?- Stormsdarkangel1yrCommented
Umm, hello?! Why would it be a joke? More like the Moon goddess is trying to save you from making a huge mistake. You should be thanking her for your mate showing up before you married a chosen(aka forced) mate. Engagements, easy to break off. Most wolves revere the mate bond.
'Moon Goddess,' I thought, 'what kind of cruel joke are you playing at?' - Stormsdarkangel1yrCommented
But Jorge was already told to leave and not come back when she was in the old room. These paragraphs make it read like that never happened.
"I was doing as you told me, alpha. She was being difficult, so I sought out new methods." - Stormsdarkangel1yrCommentedHas he turned to such a man-whore?
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Glowing some sort of Vegas? What??!
They were glowing some sort of Vegas, dark gold color with a cedar red slit in the middle, giving the wolf an intimidating look. - Stormsdarkangel1yrReplied to genona
Right?! Way to not know what’s going on.
Alpha Damien had given him a piece of his mind this morning which Included getting a fist aimed at his jaw. Marcy was his little sister after all, and he couldn't risk seeing her hurt; especially not by her own husband. - Stormsdarkangel1yrCommented
AMY. her name is not ARMY
"Your room?" Jenny nodded her head. "Okay, let's go to your room then." She motioned for Army to follow. - Stormsdarkangel1yrPosted
90 chapters into this book and it’s good so far. Developing war, love and rivalries are intriguing. Good world building, solid plot and players. Very few grammatical and spelling errors, especially compared to other novels on apps. Characters and their growth is well done. Can’t wait to read the rest of the story. Nervous of other reviews that mention a poor ending, cliffhangers or no conclusion to the end of the story.
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So little editing, so many errors. Grammatical and typos like Ling Vials instead King Vilas and referring to the same character as cousin one minute and sister the next make the story confusing. The plot and world building is decent, the characters are solid. I’m interested and want to read to the end. But to spend more coins on something so frustratingly unedited seems like a waste of money. If it was free for a weekend I would read it all.
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Soft blemish free skin? What happened to the scars and marks from her years of abuse?
Her soft, blemish-free skin, the smooth shallows of her body, and how she molded around me as if the gods made her for me– - Stormsdarkangel1yrCommented
**slender. Not slander.
My eyes closed, and everything about him rose up in my mind. His slander and powerful fingers that brushed over my skin, his deep voice that rang over my ear, his cold and musky scent that surrounded me, and his piercing and clear blue eyes that locked on me… - Stormsdarkangel1yrCommented
Qs? **was
Despair and fear swept over me. It qs like in the deepest nightmare, I could only make the faintest sound with all my might. - Stormsdarkangel1yrCommented
You mean Ann launching at Ada? right?!
He knew she was going to launch herself at Ann before she did it. - Stormsdarkangel1yrCommented
So, Brad’s story is still it was a one time thing. But when confronted earlier by Maeve, shes says she blocked the pain many times… So was he banging more than just Ada? Definitely lying about one time only? Blind drunk, but it was Ada’s name he called. So he knew who he was doing. And is Ada really pregnant? Cuz if it really was just one time a few days prior, she wouldn’t know if she was pregnant. Inconsistent.
Ch 37 CHAPTER 37 The Unwilling Alpha - Stormsdarkangel1yrCommented
Ling Vials??? Really? King Vilas has enough grammatical errors around him to kill the story.
Neither did Ling Vials continue this overreaction, nor did Daniel let things much affect him. But he did have another talk to do. - Stormsdarkangel1yrCommented
Sought should be sort.
What sought of madness was this? - Stormsdarkangel1yrCommented
Ah, another Romina instead of Belladonna. At least edit the name of your MAIN character correctly.
Romina looked away from her, her eyes onto the warriors instead. She started searching through the guards for the Dragon King, so that she would know whose attention she didn't want to draw. - Stormsdarkangel1yrCommented
Accomplishing should be accompa nying
King Vilas and King Almen sat opposite each other. While their sons were accomplishing them in this dinner, who was seated beside them.