Literature has truly peaked. Men such as Shakespeare and Dostoyevsky can not dream of ever gracing the level of writing that is being exhibited in novel that i would rather refer to as a masterfully crafted piece of art.

Well i would like to say that there are possibilities for improvments. It was kind of hard to keep up with what was going on because it is the first chapter and the pacing felt a bit fast. More characters were introduced than i would have liked in a first chapter, but it seemed interesting enough and i like the names for the characters.