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  • HotGarbage
    HotGarbage1yr
    Replied to Bleap

    Hello, Bleap. I was just wondering if I could be your proofreader or beta reader. I noticed that there are some small mistakes that could have been fixed if someone proofread the chapter before it got published. Reply to this if you're interested.

    Ch 21 A Reason To Fight
    Fate/Disturbance
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  • HotGarbage
    HotGarbage1yr
    Commented

    half a dozen what?

    Kirei was once again cut off, this time however by half a dozen blowing through the Church walls, headed straight for both Bazett and Aston.
    Fate/Disturbance
    Anime & Comics · Bleap
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  • HotGarbage
    HotGarbage1yr
    Commented

    Preserved should be persevered.

    "And this.." The knight put a hand to his cheek, running his fingers across it, "Is the gift they left me." They'd thought it would kill him and it should have, but he preserved, dragged himself through the mud and dirt to safety, to the forest where he met his dearest friend and greatest enemy.
    Fate/Disturbance
    Anime & Comics · Bleap
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