That was fantastic. Please keep writing. You could easily be published. I would love to read more.

next to the couch

Woo! That was hot!

excellent

split the party! split the party! split the party!

Awesome

Loved that! Excellent reveal and reasoning. Well done

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At this point, this novel is the reason I look forward to checking in each day. Superb story telling. Keep up the incredible writing, Guiltythree!![img=recommend]

the enemy of my enemy, bish

I can't say enough great things about this novel. From the beautifully developed characters to the engrossing world building. I wish I had this in real novel form. It is worthy of displaying properly on a bookshelf; to be read again periodically. 🖤 Great job.

That was brilliant! I love this book so much'

This story is enthralling and mesmerizing. Love the character development and the interaction between them. I'm always looking forward to seeing how the plot unfolds.

Stories, in English, need to stay in past tense. It would help readability if the verb tense was consistent

This reads like it was written by a bot or translated directly. Sentence flow and structure are really awkward.

Grammar editing needed

This was so good!! I can't wait to read more!