The story is actually quite enjoyable. There are some grammar mistakes, but they are only a few. There’s a nice Character Design as well as Character Development, with different Characters. We haven’t seen anything of the main character yet, other than her being born in the first chapter. But we get a nice introduction of the World Background. So overall, the Story progresses in a nice tempo nonetheless. I hope the author keeps going with the story, and stays motivated. Enjoyable read!