plot Armor: 10 MC: trash, hypocritical interesting read, but the story is garbage. Or maybe the perspective is garbage. we are basically following a 1000+ year old child with insecurities mad at the world for things not going his way.

The story itself is quite enjoyable. MC is childish. MC is smart while the world around him is stupid. There are some really tense emotional and moral scenes that are quite enjoyable Harem is harem and I will always find it annoying. That said, his wives are at least involved and live their own lives that we actually keep up with. But the reason for this review and the reason I find interesting. The has a premise whereby some way somehow a UNIVERSE has only 5 planets on average (less than our solar system!!!)

The book is very good and nice to read. But oh God, the translation is abysmal. it's not so bad in the earlier chapters but in the later chapters, it's like the translator lost passion for the work. The grammar is just terrible. it's so bad that it affects immersion. 😪this amazing story deserved so much better

Good story! Great story, even. But for the love of pancakes, this translation is abysmal! If the story wasn't good, I swear I wouldn't read this. I like the story but hate the translation. Read this if you have a high threshold for terrible English and have an auto correct in your head