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True. Yes I have also got bothered by the timeline inconsistency and technological jumbs that shouldn't be possible. But the author concept is really good i hope author or someone really write a good german alternate history like this. If the author is really continuing this story pls edit out chapters it became really unenjoyable and if your using AI pls proof read. Author pls read other alternate history books to get an idea and how to enrich your novel.

I don't know if the author is a newcomer author but there any many problems that sticked out to me. Anyway author have much to improve in writing skills. My suggestion : 1) The emotional depth btw characters should be improved. 2) I feel MC is to OP that it feels to easy and everything he does succeed. 3) I feel other characters worshiping like behaviour is really bad for the novel as it destroys the immersiveness as it would not happen in real life Anyway all of the above are my personal opinion try it out yourself. Thank You

isn't he dou master??

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scared me for a second . Anyway hope you will continue this novel, so far really enjoyed it. I am not be able to help you financially but will show my support by reading it 😁😁

"Pikachu"

So i read some chapters of this novel in some other sites but i didn't like how the story development was going and grammar issues. but anyway I Really liked the power system ( u know the sect rank upgrade stuff) so i want to know if there is some webno ves similar to this power system. I would really appreciate your help. Thank you 😊 and have a nice day

The story plot is really good but usage of AI and repetitive sentences make it hard to immerse in the story. If you don't mind the above mentioned issue then the story is passable. Author try to improve the emotional depth of characters and try to reduce repetitive sentences. (above mentioned are my personal opinion. try it yourself maybe you would find it good 😊)

Thank you 😊😊