It has been really interesting seeing this story develop. Certainly times of action and battle with monsters, but also more complicated elements in characters as they develop. I am always wondering what will happen next.[img=update]

I am still surprised by the twists and turns in each chapter of this story. I especially want to find out what happens with this new character. She could be almost anything the way things have gone so far.

Such an interesting couple of chapters! Once again I am surprised at the directions this story is taking. There are many times of real emotion, from fear and excitement to compassion. What will be next?

I'm starting to worry about spoilers, but there have some scary monsters already and this chapter is really ending on a tense cliff hanger! I can't wait to find out what happens next.

This is a very emotionally moving chapter well written. A great point for these thoughts as Theo plans to go out into danger. So Theo considers his past as a teacher on Japan - and if he has any chance of a future in this terrible place. First survival, then is there any way out?

After a pretty relentless growing horror this is some light rest and recovery. It's really needed as the narrator has come of very badly from his encounters with the monsters. But by the end of this chapter it's looking grim again. What exactly is the power that has him trapped here. Hanging out for the next instalment!

After some gruelling events I was glad this finished with a little relief and even a bit of humour.

The only character - so far anyway - seems like a normal person in a terrible situation. The story gets you in to a mysterious and frightening world with a lot that needs to be explained, like how did he get here, where the heck is he, what are all these terrible creatures!? Everything develops slowly but steadily. I keep wanting to find out what happens next. So far new chapters have been posted each week, Saturday or Sunday.

The story is developing well and is getting pretty weird and disturbing. I'm caught up in the action, wanting to know what's going to happen next an how the hero will survive. I like that he wants to do the right thing, but isn't actually an action hero.