Jaydn_McVeigh_5538
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Jaydn_McVeigh_553820dCommentedyou funny bastard
That gets a reaction from the other boy immediately. "What's your name?"- Jaydn_McVeigh_55381mthCommented
Man you light up my days please don't get killed
A.N. I have some bad news. I will be gone from May 6. I have been selected to do mandatory military training for nine months. I will post as usual until the end of April and then post the rest of the chapters I have on my pa treon before I am gone. I don't know how much free time I will have in the military, but from what I hear, I should have weekends off, even if not all of them. So, I will try to write as much as I can on weekends and holidays. Thought I would probably have to drop most of my stories until I finished my training. I want to focus on ending "What is dead may never die" and continue "Will of embers." Thanks for reading and support. - Jaydn_McVeigh_55381mthCommented
bicth is a snitch
The air between them grew thick with foreboding, as Windu continued, "Peter's behavior during, and especially after our mission, has raised some alarms in me…" - Jaydn_McVeigh_55381mthCommented
At this point not really peace loving monks
With a nod, they circled Ronan, who, despite his grievous injury, readied himself for another assault. His eyes burned with a fire that was both terrifying and pitiable. "I…will not…be defeated by…peace-loving monks," Ronan spat, gripping his hammer with his remaining hand, its purple glow brightening by the second. - Jaydn_McVeigh_55381mthCommented
love the fanfic but I feel like she should have been around enough conquers who are ready to die for there belief it be more like deep respect
"You truly don't fear death, do you?" Shakky's voice quivered with a mix of awe and concern, her eyes reflecting the weight of my words as she grasped their true meaning. - Jaydn_McVeigh_55381mthCommented
Mate worked at suicide hot line in his free time
"Wow... they've done it..." Fred said with some surprise upon witnessing that collective suicide "This phrase only works once out of thirty attempts... - Jaydn_McVeigh_55381mthCommentedCh 67 Short break (Part 2)
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Force her to debate can zombies swim or not ?
What happened next was something that only those on the rooftop bore witness to… - Jaydn_McVeigh_55382mthCommented
He from the streets
"Yeah. Nothing good comes out of being involved with the cops." My father said, as he gave them a call. - Jaydn_McVeigh_55382mthCommented
compared to the comics he the good guy
As their hands clasped she thought 'Aren't you the most rotten of them all?' - Jaydn_McVeigh_55382mthCommented
Possible si ?
Ser Harras and Anguy told me stories of the last six kings of Dorne who were sent to the Wall by princess Nymeria. The last of House Dryland was King Lucifer. For some reason, I found the name amusing. Lucifer, king of hell, I like how it sounded. I drew the ruins in my journal as the night sky descended upon us. - Jaydn_McVeigh_55382mthCommented
Then get knocked the fuck out
She didn't look satisfied with my explanation. But even if I told the truth, she wouldn't believe it. Magic was gone for a long time in Westeros. Dead stayed dead. That is how the world worked. Still, ultimately, it is up to the gods to decide how the world works. - Jaydn_McVeigh_55382mthCommented
Could have 100 makes no difference
When Basil reached the first rebel, he swiped his legs with a single kick and snapped both of his arms before heading toward the next rebel. He then began to speed things up, vanishing from the rebels' eyes. From their point of view, their friends, family, and allies were simply dropping like flies for no reason! Even Zyla, with her three eyes, couldn't keep track of the eldest prince! - Jaydn_McVeigh_55382mthCommentedCh 85 Trial by combat
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Guy Ritchie My man
"Guys, this is just ridiculous," I said, putting my hands in my pockets, and addressing the gang. "Guys cut, girls shoot, kids fight, adults measure minds. Here it is, the real battlefield - Gray Substance." - Jaydn_McVeigh_55382mthCommented
Best side chick ever
"So, you're cheating on me?" Tien's voice oozed with mock offense and disbelief. "The disciple of Kami, the Turtle School, and now me too? Am I just your side chick?" - Jaydn_McVeigh_55383mthCommented
I genuinely enjoy your novel I also think you should do grammar checks and maybe a more indepth background because I would love to hear what he did as a architect maybe also Try povs for the experimce
A/N- I always had problems writing long texts and do my best to make at least 800 word each chapter. To me that already feels rather long when I write it but recently I saw a comment from an author on another book saying he did 2000 to 3000 every chapter and I was like 'Whaaaaaaat?!'. So please tell me, are my chapter too short and do you have any other suggestions that could improve my writing or book quality? - Jaydn_McVeigh_55383mthCommented
Bless him
"Got my cat though. Oh she tried, but Trixie chose me so… screw that bitch." - Jaydn_McVeigh_55383mthCommented
What are you a breeding stallion ?
After a long day at the Ministry he just wanted to go home eat dinner finish his work and go to bed. After his most recent child their expenses rose and his salary wasn't going to be enough specially when his wife wanted another child. Sometimes he felt that they probably should've stopped after the twins but he couldn't say that to his lovely wife.