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Understand that they are lords, not Earls. Translate and correct the chapters, And when the story begins,

Understand that they are lords, not Earls. Translate and correct the chapters, And when the story begins,

Write correctly, it's Lord, not Earl. If you're going to translate the story, at least correct the titles; it's annoying to read Earl instead of Lord.

Write correctly, it's Lord, not Earl. If you're going to translate the story, at least correct the titles; it's annoying to read Earl instead of Lord.

Write correctly, it's Lord, not Earl. If you're going to translate the story, at least correct the titles; it's annoying to read Earl instead of Lord.

Is the character thirty-one years old?

Author, please tell me if the main character will have a relationship with an OC so I don't waste time reading more chapters. The story is excellent and entertaining, but it's not worth it if there are relationships with an OC.

They're not called barons. Please correct that.

That's nonsense. How can a dragon obey an order that doesn't come from its rider? It's impossible, let alone obey it, since it only receives orders from its rider. Even if its rider ordered it to obey someone else's orders, it would never do so. Please correct tha.

Seriously, another OC? Ugh! Is this going to be a story about nothing but OCs? am I not interested in OCs, just the main character? So please stop adding OCs to the story. All you're doing is making it impossible to read with so many OCs.