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As a presidential ad would say “I approve of this message.” Harry Potter is better fit to be born April 1rst.
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He’s been conditioned. He says something, Brian is believed. He does something, Brian is believed. He knows telli ny people won’t work cause no one will believe him. Then again, it seems kind of like his mental health is kind of brushed over. His actions are clearly kind of forced. He doesn’t flinch when reached for or go on inner monologues of self doubt or pain. But sometimes it’ll be mentioned more of like a cover for why nothing has happened. Kind of like coving a hole in the plot.
Speaking from experience, I’d rather have emotional neglect. Being emotionally stunted seems fun compared to the thought of being physically abused. It’s like trauma vs trauma. None is good, but there is a reason why verbal can only be a he said she said situation, while physical abuse leaves evidence.
Does he need reality or a real family lol. He only has Remus. It makes sense for him to crave actual love/affection. 6 months of living with them may not seem like much, but Harry Potter only took a visit from Hagrid to be Dumbledore’s pawn.
I find reading your comments just as fun as reading the story. Like the person watching a killer movie telling the guy to “TURN AROUND”.
Patience is a virtue I don’t have. Can he seduce the portrait? lol
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This book is good. I’d also suggest Hogwarts Emerald for any who like this book. 701 chapters and very similar.
See this! I just gifted the story: Luxury car