so far a very interesting take on the video game genre.. I am thoroughly enjoying the journey..

is it weird that I immediately thought of Heaphestus's Talos when it was named? he needs a lightning ability... Llal

nope.. just an average white male..

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

I'm confused.. in what world is seven inches large? seven is barely average..

good set up.. main and side character base properly filled out.. not enough background for world as of yet..

Well thought out building of background.. world on brink of collapse with a disease bringing forth the needed abilities of those to save it..