HopefulMonkey

Yeah but there's still Bending and AOT. It's like using a hammer to cut a plank of wood.

That's just stupid, revealing his powers like that; he'd be experimented on before he could say, TITAN. it would have been perfectly fine just to have subtle Air bending so he can maneuver better or cut a titan's neck with greater ease than normal. having to control all the elements in an AOT world doesn't sound so immersive.

Good thing the mine hadn't blown up.

Pure Arrogance. He could ask for help. it's not like he's the only one living in that world.

More like 'Wanted' rather than 'Needed'. there's no crisis prompting him to improve.

There's no need to rush him right? he's currently just a foal(?) so what is he trying to achieve that early?

Quite arrogant. none knows what the future holds and him saying that is like 'the water is wet' kind of thing.

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