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not going to lie, I do sometimes cringe at that chapter before when I try and re-read it. but yeah I do get your point, dunno what I am thinking before however I won't be doing that kind of stuff in the future. ( the prologues until the chapter 3 or 4 is when I am trying plan the story ahead of time and also try to write better. so I just throw in a general chinese novel cringe situation which is a big mistake in my part. ) and also for the killing a person in broad daylight, I kind of poorly executed it as well. since I forgot to mention how the system of deathmatch works and also who organizes/ruled over the four cities and the laws they implemented it. so there is also that mistake in that chapter, however I'll be introducing them later, around the next 2 chapter or so. *Once again, I apologize for the bad chapters in the early round. since I kind of have no experience what so ever so yeah, trying things new here and there and see what works or not*
Actually there are laws implemented in order to prevent ppl killing each other but when it came to challenging one to a deathmatch, then there will always be 1 victor but people can deny the request. ( I just didn't properly introduce these 4 associations yet, since I will be introducing them in the future. )