DaoistGxPCLk

so far the story is pretty good I wonder what Familia he will join so keep up the good work

ok this is a nice start to a story

this is really good just wish we had more backstory to the mc but this is a one shot so its's understandable

technoblade

it is really good I just wish the there were more chapters to read

gigidy gigidy

keep writing this novel ple