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Tempua

Tempua

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A newly born author but also an old man of imagination. (Note that im not really old man it's just a metaphor. alright I'll explain, im a new being an author but im long enough an imaginator.)

2023-01-30 JoinedPhilippines
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  • Tempua
    Tempua1mth
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    Authors's here to write a self review about this novel. Lets's start right away, I'll devide my review into four. —World review —Character review —System review —Writing review •World review —The World of this novel resides in the time of Semi-medieval with Humans, elves, dwarves, demons, beastfolks, and many hidden race are the people inside the world. The world itself is called Noobia, divided into three continents, it's the Yandi the northern continent, Shindo the Eastern continent, and Ryoka the western continent. The kingdom will be revealed inside the novel itself. •Character review —The characters of the series can be a bit chaotic, for example of this are our MC, Xian, she was originally cold in neutral but sometimes, her softness will rouse from her heart. It's not only this, characters of this series have their own secrets that will drive the noble crazy. It will be revealed eventually as the series progresses. •System review —Mentioned in the description that this series is inspired by LOTM and TBATE, and that's right, we have artifacts, ritual, and church system for LOTM. Color based ranking, Elemental affinity, and pets for TBATE. There is also the transendance which is out of nowhere but will eventually blend with all of mentioned earlier. It will be revealed slowly but surely in the series. •Writing review —Our author here is not really expert in writing, y'all will see different mistakes in writing inside the novel but I'll try my best to improve each chapter. In conclusion, the novel was great and have a good potential despite the writing abilities of the author, the uploading time is also good. The systems is quite out of line and y'all might not really get it perfectly but I will try my best to explain it at my best.

    Xian: Trancendant's Journey
    Fantasy · Tempua
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  • Tempua
    Tempua2mth
    Posted

    Author here who loves female MC. Im here to self review my novel and hope you like it. (this review is from ch 1 to ch 13) The novel cant't be decided if its's slow or fast in story development but I can guaranteen that y'all can understand the flow of the story. For the update stability, I'd say it was pretty good considering that the novel is updated almost everyday and each chapters contains 1000 words at the least. The author which is me, is not really a good in English to begin with but tempua which is me is slowly making progress with the English and still keeps studying. Dont' expect much, but I hope you like my Ideas. Anyways that now you're here reading my stuff, why not check the map of the Neap City.

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