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lmao I know right. If she'd just told him he would get food if he'd stayed he would at least consider it. I also think that a plotline could be that the master convinced the mc that he's ugly and if that's the case then she doesn't deserve much, I could be wrong though.
How are there only 4 clears in 3 years if all you need is real life experience with a sword and determination. The book hasn't really told us that he's a prodigy with a sword but he's apparently goated enough to solo clear two bosses in a row?
no but genuinely why is she so into Theodore, author making it seems like him seeing her as nothing but a teacher is a bad thing but it's only been one day since they've known each other?
It probably is edited using GPT or other writing assistants. GPT has a very weird way of writing, it repeats itself a lot, uses the em dash (—) a lot and also describes actions ins three adjectives with full stops in between. Ex: Fast. Clean. Satisfying Practiced. Easy. Smoothe I understand the appeal of using GPT, writing is hard but I still think the original style of the author should come through. A lot of novels feel like they are written by the same author now. But it clearly works so maybe I am just over reacting
I'm assuming its more the noble girl that doesn't want him, either because he didnt do much in combat or because he was a bit unfriendly (justifiably). And the romcom mc being nice guy agreed to her terms.
yo? long range fighter maybe? Marksman or mage? Not to say perception isn't useful in close range but this looks like a long range fighter skill
Damn how did bro miss an entire magic system 💀. Great work so far, the protagonist is written in a way that makes him feel smart but not arrogant.
Probably just going to make the ex raider train the men
I don't think that's what he was trying to convey. He is demonstrating his ability to lead by thinking ahead, the scars and bruises he got by doing things that contributed to their escape a long time before it actually happened. For example breaking that urn of wine to get pottery shards or taking count of the number of guard and where they're positioned.
That and shooting a gun isn't actually as hard as most people think. They are made to be easy to use so if you take your time to aim in close to mid range, you probably won't miss.